Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not good at memorizing things most of the time. I always forget anything. For example, maybe I make a plan at the meeting, but the next moment I will forget it.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yeah, for sure. I've gotten something important before. For example, last year I overslept and missed the start time of an important exam. It was very stressful because I hadn't prepared to reschedule it. And I learned to set multiple alarms after that experience.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In my daily life, I need to remember many things such as important appointments, tasks, and scientific knowledge. Among these, I think knowledge is the most important because it helps me solve problems and make better decisions. For example, understanding science allows me to.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I really do many things to help me to do it such as I will for example I will make a list and make something like what time I need to do or what things I need to do from time to time to finish it.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言较为口语化且有重复,表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: No, I usually find it hard to remember things. For instance, I might make a plan during a meeting but forget it shortly after.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,但部分表达不够准确,如“I've gotten something important before”不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,增强表达的清晰度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For example, last year I overslept and missed the start of an important exam. It was very stressful because I hadn't planned to reschedule it. Since then, I always set multiple alarms.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答未完整,句子中断,缺乏具体细节。建议完整表达观点,补充具体例子,使内容更具体和连贯。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments, tasks, and knowledge. For example, understanding science helps me solve problems and make informed decisions.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱,句子结构不清晰,缺乏连贯性。建议简化句子,使用清晰的结构和连接词,具体说明方法。
Ví dụ: I usually make lists to remember important tasks. I write down what I need to do and when, which helps me stay organized and complete everything on time.
× I always forget anything.
✓ I always forget things.
这里使用了否定词any,通常在肯定句中不使用any,应该用things来表达泛指的事物。
× maybe I make a plan at the meeting, but the next moment I will forget it.
✓ maybe I make a plan at the meeting, but the next moment I forget it.
这里描述的是习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时而不是将来时。
× I've gotten something important before.
✓ I've forgotten something important before.
原句中用gotten(得到)与上下文不符,应该用forgotten(忘记)来表达忘记重要事情的意思。
× I hadn't prepared to reschedule it.
✓ I wasn't prepared to reschedule it.
这里表达过去某时的状态,应该用过去时态的be动词加形容词prepared,而不是过去完成时。
× For example, understanding science allows me to.
✓ For example, understanding science allows me to solve problems.
句子不完整,缺少谓语动词,导致表达不清楚。需要补充完整的动作。
× I really do many things to help me to do it such as I will for example I will make a list and make something like what time I need to do or what things I need to do from time to time to finish it.
✓ I do many things to help me remember, such as making a list of what I need to do and when I need to do it to finish tasks on time.
原句结构混乱,表达不清晰,需要调整句子结构,使其更简洁明了。