Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
The answers will be yes, but also be no. That that is because the way I like, the way I tend to remember right things is more different like other people's. But it's hard to. It's hard, quite hard to explain.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
No, I more often forget something on our daily little things in daily life, but instead of important things.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Well, I train actually, I train myself to to meet the status last days. I don't need to remember those kind of little things in my life. So I won't forget, you know.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Well, I tend to set the reminder on my phone or Google Calendar for those important things in case that I forgot.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰,句子结构混乱,缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地直接回答问题,并用一两个具体细节支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things, but my method is different from others. For example, I prefer to associate information with images, which helps me remember better.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅,语法错误较多,且句子结构不完整。建议直接回答问题,并用具体例子说明。
Ví dụ: No, I have never forgotten anything important. However, I sometimes forget small daily tasks like where I put my keys.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不明确,表达混乱,缺乏具体细节。建议直接说明日常需要记住的事情,并用连词连接句子。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and deadlines. Therefore, I make lists to keep track of these important tasks.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体,但句子稍显简单。建议使用更多连接词丰富表达,使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually set reminders on my phone or Google Calendar because they help me remember important events and deadlines easily.
× The answers will be yes, but also be no.
✓ The answer will be yes, but also no.
句子结构不完整,'also be no'缺少主语,导致表达不清晰。应简化为'The answer will be yes, but also no.',使句子完整且通顺。
× That that is because the way I like, the way I tend to remember right things is more different like other people's.
✓ That is because the way I like, the way I tend to remember things is different from other people's.
句子结构混乱,重复使用'that'且表达不清晰。'more different like'用法错误,应改为'different from'。调整后句子更符合英语表达习惯。
× But it's hard to.
✓ But it's hard to explain.
句子不完整,缺少谓语动词,导致意思不明确。补充完整谓语动词'explain',使句子完整。
× No, I more often forget something on our daily little things in daily life, but instead of important things.
✓ No, I more often forget little things in daily life, but not important things.
句子结构混乱,'something on our daily little things'表达不当,应简化为'forget little things in daily life',并用'but not important things'表达对比,更符合英语习惯。
× Well, I train actually, I train myself to to meet the status last days.
✓ Well, I actually train myself to meet deadlines.
句子结构混乱,'to to meet the status last days'表达错误且不通顺。应改为'train myself to meet deadlines',更准确表达意思。
× I don't need to remember those kind of little things in my life.
✓ I don't need to remember those kinds of little things in my life.
'those kind of'用法错误,复数名词前应使用'those kinds of',以保持数的一致性。
× Well, I tend to set the reminder on my phone or Google Calendar for those important things in case that I forgot.
✓ Well, I tend to set reminders on my phone or Google Calendar for those important things in case I forget.
'forgot'为过去式,句意表达的是一般现在时的习惯动作,应使用现在时'forget'。此外,'the reminder'改为复数形式'reminders'更符合习惯用法。