Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了观点，但语言稍显重复且不够自然。建议简化表达，避免重复使用相似词汇，使回答更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details quickly.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但句子结构较长且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意时态和介词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, about two years ago, I forgot where I put my ID card, but the hotel reception helped me find it, which I really appreciated.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但表达稍显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意介词搭配，如“stored somewhere”而非“stored in somewhere”。

Ví dụ: I need to remember where I put my keys every day. Also, I keep important papers like instructions in places that are easy for me to remember.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: I usually write down where I put important things in my notebook because it's small and easy to carry, so I can check it anytime.

× Yes, around two years ago I once forgot where my identification card is and finally the reception of the hotel helped me find it and I appreciate for her assistance.

✓ Yes, around two years ago I once forgot where my identification card was and finally the reception of the hotel helped me find it and I appreciate her assistance.

这里涉及“there be”问题，主要是时态不一致。句子中描述的是过去发生的事情，应该用过去时态“was”而不是现在时态“is”。另外，“appreciate for”是不正确的搭配，正确用法是“appreciate her assistance”，不加“for”。

× Yes, around two years ago I once forgot where my identification card is and finally the reception of the hotel helped me find it and I appreciate for her assistance.

✓ Yes, around two years ago I once forgot where my identification card was and finally the reception of the hotel helped me find it and I appreciate her assistance.

“appreciate”后面不需要介词“for”，这是介词使用错误。正确表达是“appreciate her assistance”。

× Besides, the paper files that are useful such as the instructions should also be stored in somewhere I can remember easily.

✓ Besides, the paper files that are useful such as the instructions should also be stored somewhere I can remember easily.

“stored in somewhere”中“in”是不必要的介词，应该直接用“stored somewhere”。

× Generally I will write down the positions of the important things on my notebook, which is more enough to be carried in my pocket and I I use this way because it is convenient no matter where I am.

✓ Generally I will write down the positions of the important things in my notebook, which is small enough to be carried in my pocket, and I use this way because it is convenient no matter where I am.

“more enough”是不正确的量词搭配，正确表达是“small enough”。另外，“write down ... on my notebook”应改为“in my notebook”，因为写在笔记本里用介词“in”。

× Generally I will write down the positions of the important things on my notebook, which is more enough to be carried in my pocket and I I use this way because it is convenient no matter where I am.

✓ Generally I will write down the positions of the important things in my notebook, which is small enough to be carried in my pocket, and I use this method because it is convenient no matter where I am.

句子结构不够清晰，缺少逗号分隔，且重复了“I”。应调整为两个并列分句，并去掉重复词。