Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. For example, I still remember what I wear on my first day of the primary school. It's about 70 years ago.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, although I think I'm good at memory things, but I also forgot something important at the past.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Firstly, I need to remember the work tasks that I haven't completed. What's more, I need to remember some trivial things in my life, for example, paying electricity bill.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Besides remembering important things in my brain, I also write down the important things on the sticky notes and stick it on my refrigerator.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子结构稍显简单,且“memorizing”拼写不统一。建议丰富句型,避免重复表达,并注意拼写一致性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing things. For instance, I vividly recall the outfit I wore on my first day of primary school, even though it was nearly 70 years ago.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如“memory things”应为“memorizing things”,且句子结构重复。建议简化句子并使用正确表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, even though I have a good memory, I have forgotten some important things in the past.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰,但“paying electricity bill”缺少冠词,且连接词使用可更自然。建议注意细节表达和连接词的多样性。
Ví dụ: Firstly, I need to remember the work tasks I haven't completed. In addition, I have to keep track of trivial matters in my daily life, such as paying the electricity bill.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答表达清晰,但“remembering important things in my brain”表达不够自然,且“stick it”应与复数“notes”一致。建议使用更自然的表达和注意主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Besides relying on my memory, I write important things on sticky notes and stick them on my refrigerator to remind myself.
× I still remember what I wear on my first day of the primary school.
✓ I still remember what I wore on my first day of primary school.
这里描述的是过去发生的事情,动词应使用过去式。'wear'是现在时,应该改为过去式'wore'。另外,'the primary school'中的定冠词'the'不必要,通常说'primary school'即可。
× I also forgot something important at the past.
✓ I also forgot something important in the past.
短语中应使用介词'in the past'表示过去的时间,'at the past'是不正确的介词搭配。
× I think I'm good at memory things, but I also forgot something important at the past.
✓ I think I'm good at memorizing things, but I also forgot something important in the past.
'memory things'表达不正确,应该用动名词'memorizing things'表示记忆的动作或能力。
× paying electricity bill.
✓ paying the electricity bill.
'electricity bill'前需要加定冠词'the',表示特指的电费账单。
× I also write down the important things on the sticky notes and stick it on my refrigerator.
✓ I also write down the important things on sticky notes and stick them on my refrigerator.
'sticky notes'是复数,指代时应使用复数代词'them',而不是单数代词'it'。