Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memorized it”用法不当，且内容重复。建议简化表达，避免冗余，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I have many tasks every day, so I often write important notes to help me remember them.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复和语法错误，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, once I forgot to bring an important disk to a meeting with my supervisor, which contained many important files.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法和表达上的小错误，如“give a feedback”应为“give feedback”。建议注意语法准确性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to prepare lessons, give feedback to students' parents, and assign homework for the next day, so I usually write these tasks down.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“the very the very slight detailed”，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by taking notes or writing them on my phone, because sometimes the brain forgets small but important details.

× I don't think I'm good at memorizing things because nowadays we have numerous tasks to do and it is easy for us to forget one or two of these.

✓ I don't think I'm good at memorizing things because nowadays we have numerous tasks to do and it is easy for us to forget one or two of them.

这里的“one or two of these”中的“these”指代不明确，应该用“them”来指代前文提到的“tasks”，表示“其中的一两个”。

× And I remember there was a time I forgot to finish my important task of our daily job, so I memorized it.

✓ And I remember there was a time I forgot to finish an important task of our daily job, so I wrote it down to remember it.

“memorized it”用法不当，应该用“wrote it down to remember it”表示通过写下来帮助记忆。同时“my important task”改为“an important task”更自然。

× I write it on my note to memorize it.

✓ I write it in my notebook to remember it.

“write it on my note”不正确，应该用“write it in my notebook”，表示写在笔记本里。

× there was a time I forgot a detailed on my job.

✓ there was a time I forgot a detail on my job.

“detailed”是形容词，应该用名词“detail”表示“细节”。

× she told me to bring the disk which load which download numerous important datas but I forgot actually.

✓ she told me to bring the disk which contains numerous important data but I actually forgot.

“which load which download”语法错误，改为“which contains”更合适；“datas”是不可数名词，正确形式是“data”。

× I need to remember all the tests I need to finish about my job.

✓ I need to remember all the tasks I need to finish related to my job.

“tests”应为“tasks”，更符合上下文语境。

× I need to teach my lessons and then give a feedback to the students parents.

✓ I need to teach my lessons and then give feedback to the students' parents.

“a feedback”错误，feedback是不可数名词，不加冠词；“students parents”应加所有格“students' parents”。

× I also need to prepare the homework for tomorrow, so I need to write them down on the note to memorize.

✓ I also need to prepare the homework for tomorrow, so I need to write it down in my notebook to remember it.

“write them down on the note”不正确，应该用“write it down in my notebook”。

× I usually remember the significant details by taking some notes or writing down on my phone because these details could lead to big problems and it is better to write it down because the brain sometimes could forgot one or two the very the very slight detailed.

✓ I usually remember the significant details by taking some notes or writing them down on my phone because these details could lead to big problems and it is better to write them down because the brain sometimes could forget one or two very slight details.

“writing down on my phone”应为“writing them down on my phone”；“could forgot”应为“could forget”；“the very the very slight detailed”重复且“detailed”用错，应为“very slight details”。