Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
I don't think I'm that kind of person who have a good memory. Sometimes if I talked to someone, I always forget the things I tend to do. So I think I'm not a memorable person.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I have always forgotten putting things. For example, when I had to choose my majority during my university that morning, I remember deeply because I I have forgotten to take my ID card.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I was forced. I'm forced to remember a lot of things. For example, when I was in my company, I just quitted my job. So I say see it as was. I have a lot of tasks to do, so I have to write down the details.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I always take notes and write this important things down to make sure that I wouldn't forget any of them, because if I forget anything important, the result will be horrible.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องตามหลักไวยากรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'I don't think I have a good memory' และเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และชัดเจนขึ้น
Ví dụ: I don't think I have a good memory. For example, sometimes when I talk to someone, I forget the things I need to do later.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น 'I have forgotten important things before' และอธิบายเหตุการณ์อย่างละเอียดและเป็นธรรมชาติ
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things. For instance, once when I had to choose my major at university, I forgot to bring my ID card, which caused some problems.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: ควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ชัดเจน และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและถูกต้อง
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember many tasks. For example, when I worked at my company, I had to keep track of my assignments by writing them down.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'these important things' และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค
Ví dụ: I always take notes and write these important things down so that I don't forget them, because forgetting important tasks can lead to serious problems.
× I don't think I'm that kind of person who have a good memory.
✓ I don't think I'm that kind of person who has a good memory.
The subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).
× Sometimes if I talked to someone, I always forget the things I tend to do.
✓ Sometimes if I talk to someone, I always forget the things I tend to do.
The verb 'talked' is in past tense but the sentence context requires present tense to express habitual action. Also, 'the things I tend to do' is correct. The main issue is tense, but since 'Past tense issue' is ID 5 and 'Present tense issue' is ID 6, this is a present tense issue (ID 6).
× I always forget the things I tend to do.
✓ I always forget things I tend to do.
The phrase 'the things' is incorrect here because it refers to specific things already known, but the speaker means things in general. Removing 'the' corrects the quantifier usage (ID 14).
× So I think I'm not a memorable person.
✓ So I think I don't have a good memory.
The phrase 'not a memorable person' is incorrect because 'memorable' means 'worthy of being remembered' which is not the intended meaning. The speaker means they do not have a good memory. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13), but since the instruction is to correct only mistakes in the list, and 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' is ID 13, this correction is valid.
× To be honest, I have always forgotten putting things.
✓ To be honest, I have always forgotten to put things.
The verb 'forgotten' should be followed by the infinitive 'to put' rather than the gerund 'putting' after 'forgotten'. This is a modal verb usage issue (ID 4) or verb + -ing form (ID 8). Since 'forgotten' is a past participle, the correct form is 'forgotten to put'.
× For example, when I had to choose my majority during my university that morning, I remember deeply because I I have forgotten to take my ID card.
✓ For example, when I had to choose my major during university that morning, I remember it clearly because I forgot to take my ID card.
'Majority' is incorrect; the correct word is 'major'. Also, 'I have forgotten' should be 'I forgot' to match the past time frame. 'Remember deeply' is awkward; 'remember it clearly' is better. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and incorrect word choice (not in list).
× I was forced.
✓ I am forced.
The sentence 'I was forced' is incomplete and does not fit the context. The speaker likely means 'I am forced' to express a current state. This is a present tense issue (ID 6).
× I'm forced to remember a lot of things.
✓ I'm forced to remember a lot of things.
This sentence is correct and needs no correction.
× For example, when I was in my company, I just quitted my job.
✓ For example, when I was in my company, I just quit my job.
The past tense of 'quit' is 'quit', not 'quitted'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).
× So I say see it as was.
✓ So I see it as it was.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects word order. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).
× I have a lot of tasks to do, so I have to write down the details.
✓ I have a lot of tasks to do, so I have to write down the details.
This sentence is correct and needs no correction.
× I always take notes and write this important things down to make sure that I wouldn't forget any of them, because if I forget anything important, the result will be horrible.
✓ I always take notes and write these important things down to make sure that I don't forget any of them, because if I forget anything important, the result will be horrible.
'This important things' is incorrect; it should be 'these important things' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun. Also, 'wouldn't forget' should be 'don't forget' to match the present tense context. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14) and present tense issue (ID 6).