Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words such as 'however' or 'because' correctly. For example, clarify your ideas and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I am not very good at memorizing things because I often lose concentration. However, I find it easier to learn mathematical concepts than to memorize texts because I understand the logic behind them.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by providing clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases like 'not to be already on the exam' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: I don't usually forget important things because I pay close attention to my responsibilities. However, I once dreamed that I forgot my Arabic exam, which made me very frightened and anxious.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more balanced by including other daily reminders besides self-care. Also, avoid absolute statements like 'I shouldn't take care of anybody else' which may sound unnatural. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'in addition' to enrich your response.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to love and take care of myself. For example, I make sure to eat healthily and get enough rest. At the same time, I also try to be considerate of others around me.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers different methods, which is good, but try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words like 'sometimes' and 'also' effectively, and be specific about your methods. Avoid vague phrases like 'write them in somewhere'.

Ví dụ: I remember important things in several ways. Sometimes, I review them daily to avoid forgetting. I also write notes in my notebook or set reminders on my Telegram app to alert me when I need to do something.

× I don't have concentration on the information.

✓ I don't have concentration on the information.

The phrase 'concentration on the information' is awkward; it is more natural to say 'concentration' without 'on' or to say 'concentration on information' without 'the'. However, since 'concentration' is an uncountable noun, the sentence is grammatically acceptable but stylistically could be improved. This is not a strict grammar error under the provided list, so no correction is made.

× Uh, However I can learn mathematical things way better than memorizing texts and I think because this is is due to my knowledge.

✓ However, I can learn mathematical things much better than memorizing texts, and I think this is due to my knowledge.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and redundancy ('this is is'). 'However' should be followed by a comma and not preceded by 'Uh'. Also, 'way better' is informal; 'much better' is more appropriate. The phrase 'I think because this is is due to my knowledge' is awkward and redundant; it should be 'I think this is due to my knowledge.'

× But I remember a dream that I forgot my exam.

✓ But I remember a dream in which I forgot my exam.

The phrase 'a dream that I forgot my exam' is awkward. The correct relative pronoun for a dream is 'in which' or 'where'. Also, 'forgot my exam' is acceptable but 'forgot about my exam' or 'forgot to take my exam' might be clearer. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I was extremely scared of not to be already on the exam.

✓ I was extremely scared of not being already at the exam.

The phrase 'scared of not to be' is incorrect; after 'scared of' the gerund form 'being' should be used. Also, 'on the exam' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at the exam' or 'in the exam room.'

× I shouldn't take care of anybody around me except myself, because I'm the most important character in my own life.

✓ I shouldn't take care of anybody around me except myself, because I'm the most important person in my own life.

The word 'character' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'person' when referring to oneself in this context. 'Character' refers to a role or personality trait, not a person.

× Sometimes I write them in somewhere like notebooks or schedule them.

✓ Sometimes I write them somewhere like notebooks or schedule them.

The phrase 'write them in somewhere' is incorrect; 'in' should be removed. 'Write them somewhere' is correct. 'Somewhere like notebooks' is acceptable as an informal expression.