Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
I have to admit that I have a poor memory. For example, I always forget the password for my Apple ID, especially when sometimes I need to use it urgently. To solve this problem, I have to write it down on a piece of paper to check it when necessary.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Oh yes, of course. For example, I have forgot my best friend's birthday. I didn't realize until she asked me for her birthday gift. I was so embarrassed but I have nothing to do except apologizing.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
When talk about the things we need to remember in daily life, the most important one is our ID number. It is essential because it is required in many situations, such as applying for a job or solving some public problems, even if we want to register.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
In the past I always wrote them down on a piece of paper, but now I have changed into another way I prefer to. I prefer to keep them in the apps on my smartphones so these apps can send me a timely reminders. In this way I will not miss some important.
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Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言较自然，但部分表达不够简洁，且句子结构稍显重复。建议避免冗余，使用更简洁的句式，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I must admit that my memory isn't very good. For instance, I often forget my Apple ID password, especially when I need it urgently. Therefore, I write it down on paper so I can check it when necessary.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误（'have forgot'应为'have forgotten'），且表达略显简单。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，同时丰富细节，使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my best friend's birthday and only realized it when she asked me about her gift. I felt very embarrassed and apologized sincerely.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误（'When talk about'应为'When talking about'），表达稍显笼统。建议使用更准确的语法结构，并提供更多具体例子以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: When talking about important things to remember daily, I think our ID number is the most crucial. It's necessary for many situations, like applying for jobs, handling official matters, or registering for services.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不够准确的问题，如'timely reminders'前缺少冠词，句子结尾不完整。建议注意语法细节，使用连贯的句子，并避免句子残缺。
Ví dụ: In the past, I used to write important things on paper. However, now I prefer using smartphone apps that send me timely reminders, so I don't miss anything important.
Ngữ pháp
× I have forgot my best friend's birthday.
✓ I have forgotten my best friend's birthday.
这里使用的是现在完成时，助动词have后面应该接过去分词forgotten，而不是一般过去式forgot。过去分词用于完成时态，表示动作已经完成。
× I have nothing to do except apologizing.
✓ I have nothing to do except apologize.
except后面应该接动词原形而不是动名词形式。动词不定式或动词原形在此处更合适，表示除...之外没有其他选择。
× When talk about the things we need to remember in daily life, the most important one is our ID number.
✓ When talking about the things we need to remember in daily life, the most important one is our ID number.
句子缺少主语，'When talk'应改为'When talking'，使用动名词形式作状语，表示时间状语从句。
× I have changed into another way I prefer to.
✓ I have changed to another way I prefer.
动词change后面接介词to表示改变成某种方式，不能用into。'prefer to'结构不完整，应去掉to。
× so these apps can send me a timely reminders.
✓ so these apps can send me timely reminders.
a是单数不定冠词，不能修饰复数名词reminders，应去掉a。timely作为形容词修饰复数名词reminders。
× In this way I will not miss some important.
✓ In this way I will not miss anything important.
some important缺少名词，应该补充名词anything important，表示不会错过任何重要的事情。
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