Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复和语法错误，同时可以用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I think my ability to memorise depends on my interest in the subject. For example, I find it easy to remember mathematical formulas, but I often forget people's names.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单，存在重复词汇和语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I don't usually forget important things, but sometimes I forget appointments with friends. However, I rarely forget my coursework deadlines.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富词汇表达。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember various things, such as coursework deadlines, university examinations, and tasks related to my internship.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，注意词序和用词准确，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually make a to-do list on my phone and set reminders. I also prioritize the tasks to ensure I remember the most important ones.

× I think it depends on whether I interested in the things and memory.

✓ I think it depends on whether I am interested in the things and memory.

这里缺少了be动词，正确的表达应该是“whether I am interested”，表示现在的状态。

× For example, if when it comes to some mathematical formulas, I think I really feel easy to remember it, but I usually forgot the name.

✓ For example, when it comes to some mathematical formulas, I think I really find it easy to remember them, but I usually forget the names.

“formulas”是复数，指代时应该用“them”而不是“it”；“forgot”是过去式，句子时态应保持一致，改为“forget”；“name”应为复数“names”，与前文复数保持一致。

× but I usually forgot the name.

✓ but I usually forget the names.

“usually”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”，而不是过去式“forgot”。

× Not usually, but I think sometimes I I will forget the appointment with my friends, but I think it's not easy for me to forget the coursework.

✓ Not usually, but I think sometimes I forget the appointment with my friends, but I think it's not easy for me to forget the coursework.

“sometimes”表示习惯性或经常发生的动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”，而不是将来时“will forget”。

× I usually make the To Do List in my on my phone and set the reminders to remind me and also I make the priorities of them to.

✓ I usually make the To Do List on my phone and set reminders to remind me, and also I prioritize them.

“make the To Do List in my on my phone”中“in my”多余，应去掉；“make the priorities of them to”表达不自然，改为“prioritize them”更准确。