Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Also, use simpler and more natural phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I usually wake up early and feel very active. This helps me concentrate better, so I can remember information easily.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Give a clear direct answer first, then explain with simple reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete thoughts.

Ví dụ: Sometimes, I do forget important things because I am only human. Unlike a robot, I cannot remember everything all the time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my study tasks, the items I should bring to college, and my schedule for the next hour. Therefore, it is very important for me to keep track of these things.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Give a clear direct answer first, then explain your method with specific details and linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I remember important things by noting them down on my mobile phone. This method is easy and convenient, and it helps me complete my work and study tasks efficiently.

× Yes, of course I found I am good at memorizing things very easily because I get up early in the morning and concentrate my mind and every time I feel like very active so that's why I can easily memorize thing and of course because of my parents dreams I it is very.

✓ Yes, of course I find I am good at memorizing things very easily because I get up early in the morning and concentrate my mind and every time I feel very active so that's why I can easily memorize things and of course because of my parents' dreams it is very important.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'found' (past tense) instead of 'find' (present tense) to express a current ability. Also, 'memorize thing' should be plural 'memorize things' to match the context. 'Parents dreams' needs an apostrophe to show possession as 'parents' dreams'. The sentence should maintain present tense to match the question about current ability.

× Well, it is not necessary that I forget things which is important.

✓ Well, it is not necessary that I forget things which are important.

The phrase 'things which is important' has a singular verb 'is' with plural noun 'things'. It should be 'are' to agree in number. Also, 'forget' is correct in present tense here as it refers to a general statement.

× But yes I found I found sometimes I forget some important items or things because do because I am a human being which I am not.

✓ But yes, I sometimes forget some important items or things because I am a human being, not a robot.

The repetition 'I found I found' is incorrect and unnecessary. The phrase 'because do because' is redundant and confusing. The sentence should be simplified to express the idea clearly. Also, 'which I am not' is unclear; it should specify what the subject is not, e.g., 'not a robot'.

× I am not a robot which which is stored all our.

✓ I am not a robot which stores everything for us.

The phrase 'which which' is a repetition error. Also, 'is stored all our' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The relative pronoun 'which' should refer to 'robot' and the verb should be 'stores' to indicate the robot's function. The sentence needs to be completed to make sense.

× Well, in my daily life I need to remember all my important work on my study related work and what should I borrow for my college and what I should do in my next hour.

✓ Well, in my daily life I need to remember all my important work related to my studies, what I should bring for college, and what I should do in my next hour.

The phrase 'on my study related work' is incorrect; it should be 'related to my studies'. 'What should I borrow for my college' is better expressed as 'what I should bring for college'. Prepositions and word choice need correction for clarity and correctness.

× I just remember all the things because I start, I start to note all the things on my mobile phone and it is very easy and convenient thing for me to recognize all the important things.

✓ I just remember all the things because I start to note all the things in my mobile phone and it is a very easy and convenient way for me to remember all the important things.

The preposition 'on my mobile phone' is better replaced with 'in my mobile phone' or 'on my mobile phone' is acceptable but 'in' is more common for notes. Also, 'convenient thing' should be 'convenient way' to describe the method. 'Recognize' is not appropriate here; 'remember' fits better.

× And I mostly do. I mostly did my work or my study related.

✓ And I mostly do. I mostly do my work or my study-related tasks.

The sentence switches from present tense 'do' to past tense 'did' inconsistently. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'do' should be used consistently. Also, 'study related' should be hyphenated as 'study-related' and completed with a noun like 'tasks'.