Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising everyday information, like conversations or instructions. However, I find it harder to remember academic material because I often forget those details. Nevertheless, when someone tells me something important, I rarely forget it.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear, specific explanation. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday because I was very busy studying every day and night. As a result, I accidentally overlooked the date, but I remembered it later and apologized to her.

Gợi ý: Your answer is meaningful but could be expressed more naturally and clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Try to keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ví dụ: I need to remember to be myself every day because society often pressures people to change. Therefore, I remind myself not to lose my identity despite external influences.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid filler words and be specific about your methods.

Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my notebook or saving them on my mobile phone. Then, I review these notes regularly to make sure I don't forget anything important.

× I'm quite good at memorizing things but this thing is like chatting or some information but not in the school study things because I always forget those kind of things.

✓ I'm quite good at memorizing things, but this is like chatting or some information, not school study things, because I always forget those kinds of things.

The phrase 'this thing is like chatting' is awkward and unclear; 'this is like chatting' is clearer. Also, 'those kind of things' should be 'those kinds of things' because 'those' is plural, so the quantifier 'kinds' must be plural to agree.

× But if someone tells if someone told me like that, I really never forgot it.

✓ But if someone tells me like that, I really never forget it.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'If someone tells me' is present tense, so the result clause should be present tense 'I really never forget it' instead of past 'forgot'. Also, the phrase 'if someone told me like that' is redundant and confusing; it should be simplified.

× Yes, I forgot my mom's birthday because in that time I had too many studies all my days and I studied every day every night.

✓ Yes, I forgot my mom's birthday because at that time I had too many studies every day and studied every night.

The phrase 'in that time' should be 'at that time' to indicate a specific time. 'All my days' is awkward; 'every day' is more natural. Also, 'I studied every day every night' is redundant; 'studied every night' suffices.

× So I just accidentally forget my mom's birthday and I remember it's when it's all.

✓ So I just accidentally forgot my mom's birthday and I remember when it was.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past event. The phrase 'I remember it's when it's all' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'I remember when it was' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× That to be myself because in my society there are many things that change that makes someone to change and I don't want to change and lose myself.

✓ That is to be myself because in my society there are many things that change and make someone change, and I don't want to change and lose myself.

The phrase 'makes someone to change' should be 'make someone change' because 'make' is followed by the bare infinitive without 'to'. Also, the sentence was missing the verb 'is' after 'That'.

× So this is my daily reminder every day to remember who I am.

✓ So this is my daily reminder to remember who I am every day.

The phrase 'daily reminder every day' is redundant; placing 'every day' at the end clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× Uh, sometimes I use my mobile phone and read it, read everything in my notes, umm, and otherwise I use my notebook and I read, I write down everything so when I need to.

✓ Uh, sometimes I use my mobile phone to read everything in my notes, and otherwise I use my notebook where I write down everything so I can refer to it when I need to.

The phrase 'read it' is unclear; specifying 'read everything in my notes' clarifies the object. The sentence was incomplete and lacked clarity; adding 'where I write down everything so I can refer to it when I need to' completes the thought and improves coherence.