Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如'memoring'应为'memorising'，'memory things'应为'memorising things'。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I wasn't very good at memorising things, but with practice, I have improved a lot and now I can remember information more easily.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但句子结构不够完整，如'I think is really a great habit'缺少主语。建议使用完整句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Not really. I usually write down important things in my notebooks, which is a great habit because it helps me avoid forgetting important matters.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误，如主谓不一致（'things... is'应为'are'）。建议注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: The most important things I need to remember are related to my studies. For example, I have to keep track of deadlines for my academic essays and the times of meetings I need to attend.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达问题，如'just remember in my mind'不自然。建议改进表达方式，使用更准确的短语，并注意句子结构。

Ví dụ: As I mentioned before, I like to write down important things in my notebook because it's convenient and helps me remember them better.

× When I was a kid, I'm not really good at memoring things, but practice makes perfect.

✓ When I was a kid, I wasn't really good at memorising things, but practice makes perfect.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'I'm'是现在时，应该改为过去时的否定形式 'I wasn't'。另外，'memoring'拼写错误，应为'memorising'。

× Now I'm really good at memory things.

✓ Now I'm really good at memorising things.

'memory things'表达不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。

× I think is really a great habit so I don't really forget something important.

✓ I think it is really a great habit, so I don't really forget anything important.

句子缺少主语，'I think is'应为'I think it is'。另外，'something important'在否定句中应使用'anything important'。

× The most important things I need to remember is about my study.

✓ The most important things I need to remember are about my study.

主语是复数'things'，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。

× As I mentioned before, I really like to write down all the important things on my notebook.

✓ As I mentioned before, I really like to write down all the important things in my notebook.

'write down'后面应使用介词'in'表示写在笔记本里，而不是'on'。