Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều từ ngữ thừa, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trở nên logic hơn và giới hạn câu trả lời trong 3-5 câu.

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things unless I repeat them several times or write notes. For example, if I have to memorise a list, I find it difficult unless I review it often.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời theo cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Đồng thời, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For instance, once the weather forecast predicted rain, but I forgot to bring an umbrella when I went out shopping, so I got wet.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và sắp xếp ý tưởng một cách logic. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to do household chores such as cleaning and washing. I also have to complete my homework and help my parents with gardening and washing dishes.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: To remember important things, I usually write them down on a piece of paper or note them on my phone. If something is very important, I set an alarm or put a reminder on my phone's lock screen.

× Not really, but like if there are notes or maybe something that I have to like, repeat again and again, I think it is the thing that I will memorize.

✓ Not really, but if there are notes or maybe something that I have to repeat again and again, I think that is the thing I will memorize.

The phrase 'like, repeat' incorrectly uses 'like' as a filler before the verb. Removing 'like' before 'repeat' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But if you give me a list of things that you won't stop and yeah, so I cannot remember.

✓ But if you give me a list of things that you won't stop, I cannot remember them.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. Adding 'them' clarifies the object of 'remember' and corrects the pronoun usage.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I have.

The question 'Have you ever forgotten...' requires a present perfect response. 'Yes, I do' is incorrect; 'Yes, I have' is appropriate.

× It is certainly the weather when the weather forecast say that it is gonna rain.

✓ It is certainly the weather when the weather forecast says that it is going to rain.

The subject 'weather forecast' is singular, so the verb should be 'says' not 'say'. Also, 'gonna' is informal; 'going to' is preferred in formal speech.

× But when I go out like I need to buy something, I remember and I don't remember and I forgot to bring an umbrella so that I get wet.

✓ But when I went out to buy something, I remembered and then forgot to bring an umbrella, so I got wet.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Events in the past should be consistently in past tense: 'went', 'remembered', 'forgot', 'got'.

× First day maybe the work household chores like cleanings or washings.

✓ First, maybe household chores like cleaning or washing.

'Cleanings' and 'washings' are incorrect plural forms. The gerund forms 'cleaning' and 'washing' are used to describe activities.

× Another thing is that I need to do my homework and help my parents a lot.

✓ Another thing is that I need to do my homework and help my parents a lot.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Also I need to gardening and like doing dishes for them to for.

✓ Also, I need to do gardening and do the dishes for them.

'Need to gardening' is incorrect; it should be 'need to do gardening'. The phrase 'like doing dishes for them to for' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'do the dishes for them'.

× To remember important stuff I would like to firstly note into a piece of paper or if I don't have I will note it into my phone and if it's really really important I may set it into the like lock screens and set an alarm for me to remind me.

✓ To remember important stuff, I would first write it on a piece of paper, or if I don't have one, I will note it on my phone. If it's really important, I may set it on the lock screen and set an alarm to remind me.

The preposition 'into' is incorrectly used with 'note'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, the sentence is long and unclear; breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity.