Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I am I I'm so good at memory things such as memoring the world or memory the somewhat my study and I can memory day a long time.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
No, not usually.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
It have so many things I need to remember in my life such as the English word or something about my study and something about the I need to learn the.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I remember them in many ways.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当,表达不够自然和清晰。建议你简洁明了地回答问题,并使用正确的词汇和语法结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I can remember vocabulary words and important study materials for a long time.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和支持信息。建议你在回答时添加具体例子或原因,使回答更丰富和有说服力。
Ví dụ: No, I usually remember important things because I write them down in my planner or set reminders on my phone.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议你用完整的句子直接回答问题,并具体说明需要记住的内容。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember English vocabulary, study schedules, and important tasks I have to complete.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏具体细节。建议你说明具体的方法,并用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: I remember important things by making notes and setting reminders on my phone, so I don't forget them.
× Yes, I am I I'm so good at memory things such as memoring the world or memory the somewhat my study and I can memory day a long time.
✓ Yes, I am. I'm so good at memorizing things such as memorizing words or memorizing some of my study material, and I can remember them for a long time.
原句中“memory things”应为“memorizing things”,因为“memory”是名词,需用动名词形式“memorizing”表示动作。还有“memoring the world”应为“memorizing words”,“memory the somewhat my study”语法混乱,应改为“memorizing some of my study material”。此外,“memory day a long time”应为“remember them for a long time”,动词用法错误。
× It have so many things I need to remember in my life such as the English word or something about my study and something about the I need to learn the.
✓ There are so many things I need to remember in my life, such as English words or something about my study and things I need to learn.
原句中“It have so many things”主谓不一致,应为“There are so many things”。“English word”应为复数“English words”。句子后半部分结构混乱,需调整为“things I need to learn”以表达清楚。