Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I am uh, actually when I was studying uh in school, then I memorize most of the thing. Even in mathematics, if I fail to figure out the uh person, I memorize all the mathematics.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Sometimes I miss some important things like some it is funny that sometime even I forget to celebrate my birthday. So also sometimes I left my lunch box at home before going to work that are silly mistakes that I do.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
What I need to remember in my daily life is that I make sure that I belt dressed before going to work and I also don't forget to take some cookies for lunch. That are the thing I think.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Two members important thing. I always try to make some short notes, sticky notes that I test them on the fridge. So if I that reminds me to do important things, I think that is making sticky notes is the best thing to remember anything.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more coherent and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'then'. Also, structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, explain how memorizing helped you in school and give a specific example.
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, when I was in school, I memorized important formulas in mathematics, which helped me solve problems quickly during exams.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and be specific about the mistakes you make.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten some important things. For example, sometimes I forget to celebrate my birthday, and other times I leave my lunch box at home before going to work, which are silly mistakes.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Improve your sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. Also, correct grammatical errors such as 'belt dressed' which should be 'get dressed'.
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to get dressed before going to work and to take some cookies for lunch. These are important things I always try not to forget.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Clarify your sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, explain why sticky notes help you remember important things.
Ví dụ: To remember important things, I make short sticky notes and place them on the fridge. This visual reminder helps me not to forget tasks or important events.
× then I memorize most of the thing.
✓ then I memorize most of the things.
The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items being memorized, not just one.
× I memorize all the mathematics.
✓ I memorize all the mathematics.
This sentence is acceptable as 'mathematics' is an uncountable noun and does not require pluralization.
× if I fail to figure out the uh person, I memorize all the mathematics.
✓ if I fail to figure out the problem, I memorize all the mathematics.
The word 'person' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'problem' to make sense in relation to mathematics.
× Sometimes I miss some important things like some it is funny that sometime even I forget to celebrate my birthday.
✓ Sometimes I miss some important things; it is funny that sometimes I even forget to celebrate my birthday.
The phrase 'some it is funny' is incorrect and confusing; it should be separated and corrected for clarity and grammar.
× So also sometimes I left my lunch box at home before going to work that are silly mistakes that I do.
✓ Also, sometimes I leave my lunch box at home before going to work; those are silly mistakes that I make.
The verb tense and plural form are incorrect. 'Left' should be 'leave' to match present tense, and 'that are' should be 'those are' to refer to plural mistakes.
× That are the thing I think.
✓ Those are the things I think.
'That' should be 'Those' to refer to plural items, and 'thing' should be plural 'things'.
× Two members important thing.
✓ To remember important things,
The phrase is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be corrected to 'To remember important things,' to make sense in context.
× I always try to make some short notes, sticky notes that I test them on the fridge.
✓ I always try to make some short notes, sticky notes that I put on the fridge.
The phrase 'test them on the fridge' is incorrect; 'put them on the fridge' is the correct expression.