Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Uh, for me it's hard to answer this question because I'm really good at remember the things in the study but I always forget the little details in my daily life.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yeah, definitely. Just as they lost a week, I forgot to hand out my homework and pass the deadline so that I was criticized by my teacher.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
From my point of view, I think I remember the a point with others is very important because we need to be honest and it's better not to be late.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
For me, I'm really easy to forget the details in my daily life, so I am keeping a diary and I'd like to record the things happened daily.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使回答更简洁流畅。
Ví dụ: I am good at memorising study materials, but I often forget small details in my daily life.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰,语法错误影响理解。建议使用更准确的时间表达和句子结构,避免模糊和错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot to submit my homework before the deadline last week, so my teacher criticized me.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体,句子结构混乱。建议明确表达需要记住的具体事项,并使用连词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: In daily life, I need to remember appointments with others because honesty and punctuality are important.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但有语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议注意时态和句子简洁性,提高表达效果。
Ví dụ: I often forget daily details, so I keep a diary to record important events every day.
× Uh, for me it's hard to answer this question because I'm really good at remember the things in the study but I always forget the little details in my daily life.
✓ Uh, for me it's hard to answer this question because I'm really good at remembering the things in the study but I always forget the little details in my daily life.
动词短语“good at”后面应接动名词形式,因此“remember”应改为“remembering”。
× Just as they lost a week, I forgot to hand out my homework and pass the deadline so that I was criticized by my teacher.
✓ Just a week ago, I forgot to hand in my homework and missed the deadline, so I was criticized by my teacher.
时间表达不准确,应为“Just a week ago”。“hand out”意为分发,作业应用“hand in”(提交)。“pass the deadline”应为“miss the deadline”。时态和表达需符合过去发生的事件。
× From my point of view, I think I remember the a point with others is very important because we need to be honest and it's better not to be late.
✓ From my point of view, I think remembering appointments with others is very important because we need to be honest and it's better not to be late.
“remember the a point with others”表达不正确,应为“remembering appointments with others”。“remember”后接动名词形式,且“a point”应改为“appointments”(约定)。
× For me, I'm really easy to forget the details in my daily life, so I am keeping a diary and I'd like to record the things happened daily.
✓ For me, I easily forget the details in my daily life, so I keep a diary and I'd like to record the things that happen daily.
“I'm really easy to forget”表达不自然,应改为“I easily forget”。“am keeping”改为一般现在时“keep”,表示习惯动作。最后一句中“things happened daily”缺少关系代词,应为“things that happen daily”。