MemoryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Yes, I am. In high school, we need to memorize many Chinese texts and I can quickly recite them. And in English we need to remember some words and I also do that. Good.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Hardly ever. In order to prevent me to forget something, I usually make a plan to in my pad so I can check them whenever I need, which help me remember what things I need to do.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Actually depends on where I stay. If I just stay at home it has nothing to remember, but if I go out I must take my power bank and facial tissues in my back so I can stay outside.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

As I am considered, I must makes plans in my notebook and will widen in a paper stick in my text so I can check them anytime I need.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,缺乏连贯性和丰富细节。建议使用连接词使回答更流畅,并提供具体例子说明记忆能力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, in high school, I often memorised Chinese poems quickly, which helped me perform well in exams.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 语法和表达存在错误,影响理解。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和表达,并增加细节说明如何防止遗忘。

Ví dụ: I hardly ever forget important things because I usually make a plan in my notebook, so I can check it whenever necessary.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并具体说明需要记住的物品及原因。

Ví dụ: It depends on where I am. If I stay at home, I don't need to remember much, but when I go out, I always remember to bring my power bank and facial tissues to stay comfortable.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议简化句子,使用正确的语法,并具体说明记忆方法。

Ví dụ: I usually make plans in my notebook and stick notes on my textbook so I can check them whenever I need to remember important things.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× In order to prevent me to forget something, I usually make a plan to in my pad so I can check them whenever I need, which help me remember what things I need to do.

In order to prevent me from forgetting something, I usually make a plan in my pad so I can check it whenever I need, which helps me remember what things I need to do.

介词用法错误,动词不定式to forget应改为介词短语prevent sb from doing sth中的动名词forgetting;另外,'help'应与主语'which'保持单数一致,改为'helps'。建议记住固定搭配prevent sb from doing sth,并注意主谓一致。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Actually depends on where I stay.

It actually depends on where I stay.

句子缺少主语,应加上it作为形式主语。建议写完整句子,避免省略主语。

Singular and plural issue

× If I just stay at home it has nothing to remember, but if I go out I must take my power bank and facial tissues in my back so I can stay outside.

If I just stay at home, there is nothing to remember, but if I go out I must take my power bank and facial tissues in my bag so I can stay outside.

'it has nothing to remember'中'it'指代不明,应改为'there is nothing to remember';另外,'in my back'应为'in my bag',这里是词汇错误。建议注意固定表达和词汇搭配。

Third person singular issue

× As I am considered, I must makes plans in my notebook and will widen in a paper stick in my text so I can check them anytime I need.

As I am considered, I must make plans in my notebook and will write them on a paper stick in my text so I can check them anytime I need.

动词'makes'应为'make',因为主语'I'对应动词原形;'widen'用词错误,应为'write';'in a paper stick in my text'表达不清,改为'on a paper stick in my text'更合适。建议注意主谓一致和词汇准确使用。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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