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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

No, I'm not a person who could memorize things fastly and clearly.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Sure, I've forgotten my boyfriend. Yes, I have it.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Well, I think. I need to remember, take my phones when I need to go out to the door. It's very important.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Actually when something needed I choose, I have to remember it. I would write it in my reminder apps. You could remind me to to remember it.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并避免使用错误的副词形式。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things quickly and accurately.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容不合适且不清晰,缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答问题并提供具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, like my appointment or keys.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构混乱,表达不连贯。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I need to remember to take my phone with me when I go out because it's very important.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议使用简单明了的句子,说明具体方法并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: When I need to remember something important, I write it down in my reminder app, which helps me not to forget.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of adverbs

× No, I'm not a person who could memorize things fastly and clearly.

No, I'm not a person who could memorize things fast and clearly.

fastly 不是正确的副词形式,正确的副词是 fast。fastly 是错误用法。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Sure, I've forgotten my boyfriend. Yes, I have it.

Sure, I've forgotten something important. Yes, I have.

这里的 'my boyfriend' 与问题不符,且 'I have it' 用法不当,应改为 'I have' 或更合适的表达。

Sentence structure errors

× Well, I think. I need to remember, take my phones when I need to go out to the door. It's very important.

Well, I think I need to remember to take my phone when I go out. It's very important.

句子结构混乱,缺少连贯性,'take my phones' 应为单数 'phone','go out to the door' 不自然,应简化为 'go out'。

Sentence structure errors

× Actually when something needed I choose, I have to remember it.

Actually, when something needs to be done, I have to remember it.

句子结构不完整,时态和语态使用错误,'something needed I choose' 不符合英语表达习惯,应改为 'something needs to be done'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× You could remind me to to remember it.

I use reminder apps to help me remember it.

'You could remind me' 与上下文不符,且重复 'to',应改为更自然的表达方式。

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