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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things because when I study something or when I learn something, I often forget forget it especially in few days and it is very unnecessary for me. But I don't want I don't know what to do.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, I remember one stress thing for me. One day I have to write a book about about my job and I forgot to write it.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I want to remember everything in my daily life because I think that everything is significant and when I grow up, when I will be older, I want to remind everything what happened in my life.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I don't remember important things, I have very bad memory. I want to know everything but I can't and sometimes I I receive medicines to resolve this problem.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი. სცადეთ თავიდან აიცილოთ ზედმეტი სიტყვები და გამოიყენოთ ლინკი სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი იყოს ლოგიკური და თანმიმდევრული.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget what I learn within a few days. I find it unnecessary to remember everything, but sometimes I wish I knew how to improve my memory.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო სრულყოფილი და დეტალური. გამოიყენეთ ლინკი სიტყვები, რათა გაამყაროთ თქვენი აზრი და თავიდან აიცილოთ სიტყვების გამეორება.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, one stressful day I was supposed to write a report about my job, but I completely forgot to do it, which caused me a lot of trouble.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი. გამოიყენეთ ლინკი სიტყვები და უფრო კონკრეტული დეტალები, რათა გაამყაროთ თქვენი აზრი.

Ví dụ: I try to remember everything in my daily life because I believe every moment is important. When I get older, I want to look back and recall all the experiences I've had.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო პოზიტიური და დეტალური. სცადეთ გამოიყენოთ ლინკი სიტყვები და კონკრეტული მაგალითები იმის შესახებ, თუ როგორ ცდილობთ დაიმახსოვროთ მნიშვნელოვანი რამ.

Ví dụ: I have a poor memory, so I try to use reminders and notes to help me remember important things. Sometimes, I also take medicine to improve my memory, but I mainly rely on organizing my tasks carefully.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I often forget forget it especially in few days and it is very unnecessary for me.

I often forget it especially within a few days and it is very unnecessary for me.

The phrase 'in few days' is incorrect; it should be 'within a few days' to indicate the time frame properly. Also, the repeated word 'forget' is a typographical error. The verb 'forget' is correctly used in the present tense here to describe a habitual action.

Sentence structure errors

× But I don't want I don't know what to do.

But I don't know what to do.

The phrase 'I don't want I don't know what to do' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correct structure is 'I don't know what to do' to express uncertainty. The phrase 'I don't want' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence clarity.

Past tense issue

× One day I have to write a book about about my job and I forgot to write it.

One day I had to write a book about my job and I forgot to write it.

The phrase 'I have to write' should be in the past tense 'I had to write' to match the past context indicated by 'One day' and 'I forgot'. Also, the repeated word 'about' is a typographical error.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× especially in few days

especially within a few days

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'within' is the appropriate preposition to indicate a time frame that is less than or equal to a certain number of days.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I want to remind everything what happened in my life.

I want to remember everything that happened in my life.

The verb 'remind' is incorrectly used; 'remember' is the correct verb to express recalling past events. Also, 'what happened' should be 'that happened' to correctly introduce the relative clause.

Present tense issue

× when I will be older

when I am older

In time clauses introduced by 'when', the present tense is used to refer to the future, so 'will be' should be 'am'.

Present tense issue

× I don't remember important things, I have very bad memory.

I don't remember important things; I have a very bad memory.

A semicolon or period is needed to separate two independent clauses. Also, 'very bad memory' requires the article 'a' before 'very bad memory'.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I want to know everything but I can't and sometimes I I receive medicines to resolve this problem.

I want to know everything but I can't, and sometimes I take medicine to resolve this problem.

The phrase 'I receive medicines' is unnatural; 'take medicine' is the correct collocation. Also, 'medicine' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'medicines' is incorrect. The repeated 'I' is a typographical error.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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