Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying "when I study studying for my exam," say "when I study for my exams." Also, use linking words like "because" to connect ideas smoothly. Try to use more precise vocabulary such as "methods" instead of "technique."

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things because I use methods like repetition and association when I study for my exams. These techniques help me retain information more effectively, especially when learning a new language or preparing presentations.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "a multiple task" should be "multiple tasks." Also, use past tense consistently when talking about past events. Use linking words like "therefore" or "so" to show cause and effect clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important deadline for a work project because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks and did not manage my time well. Therefore, I started using reminders and calendars to stay organised and avoid making the same mistake again.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. For example, mention specific things you need to remember, such as appointments and deadlines, and explain why. Avoid vague phrases like "help reduce the test."

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important things such as completing my work tasks, keeping track of appointments and deadlines, and maintaining a healthy balance between work and health to stay productive.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and has grammatical errors. Instead of repeating "remember important things," try to vary your sentence structure. Also, use plural forms correctly, such as "various types of apps." Use linking words like "for example" to introduce examples.

Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by writing them down on my mobile phone. For example, I use various types of apps like calendars and timers to help me stay organised.

× Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing things. For example, when I study studying for my exam, I usually technique like repetitions and associations which help me retain information more effectively.

✓ Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing things. For example, when I study for my exam, I usually use techniques like repetitions and associations which help me retain information more effectively.

The phrase 'study studying' is incorrect; 'study' should be used alone as the verb. Also, 'technique' is a noun and needs a verb like 'use' before it to form a correct sentence. The correct form is 'I usually use techniques'. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× This ability has always been beneficial, specially when learning new language or preparing any presentation.

✓ This ability has always been beneficial, especially when learning a new language or preparing any presentation.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'especially' which means 'particularly'. Also, 'new language' needs an article 'a' before it. These corrections make the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× This happened because I was overwhelmed with a multiple task and didn't manage my time effectively.

✓ This happened because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks and didn't manage my time effectively.

The phrase 'a multiple task' is incorrect because 'multiple' implies more than one, so it should be plural 'tasks' without the article 'a'. This correction aligns the quantifier with the noun number.

× Since then, I will start using a reminder and calendars to stay organised and avoid similar mistakes.

✓ Since then, I have started using reminders and calendars to stay organised and avoid similar mistakes.

The phrase 'Since then' indicates a past point continuing to present, so present perfect tense 'have started' is appropriate instead of future 'will start'. Also, 'a reminder and calendars' is inconsistent; plural 'reminders' matches 'calendars'. This correction fits the time context and improves noun agreement.

× In my daily life, I used to remember various things like how I complete my work, keeping track of appointment and deadline, help reduce the test and increase productivity, and also how to balance my health.

✓ In my daily life, I remember various things like how I complete my work, keep track of appointments and deadlines, help reduce stress and increase productivity, and also how to balance my health.

'Used to remember' implies past habit, but the context is present, so 'remember' is correct. 'Keeping' should be parallel with other verbs, so 'keep' is used. 'Appointment' and 'deadline' need to be plural. 'Help reduce the test' is likely a typo for 'help reduce stress'. These corrections improve tense consistency, parallel structure, and word choice.

× I usually remember important things by writing them down in my mobile phone and also remember important thing by using various type of apps like calendars, timers etc.

✓ I usually remember important things by writing them down in my mobile phone and also remember important things by using various types of apps like calendars, timers, etc.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things' to match context. 'Various type' should be plural 'various types' to agree with plural 'apps'. Adding commas before 'etc.' is standard. These corrections improve noun number agreement and phrase accuracy.