Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not, because I tend to forget information easily even when I try my best to remember. This often causes problems for me, especially at school. For example, sometimes teachers ask me to read certain books, but I struggle to remember the details from them.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes I have. When I was a child I went to a restaurant with my parents but I got lost at the corner. Unfortunately I couldn't remember their phone numbers and I didn't have my phone with me so I couldn't contact them. It was quite scary but luckily a kind stranger helped me find them.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Your daily life In my daily life, I need to remember many important details, especially the key points included in the homework assigned by my teachers. Besides that, I often have to remember some calculations because I enjoy playing computer games that require quick thinking and problem solving skills. This helps me stay on.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Because of my bad memories, I prefer to write important notes and stick them on the door where I can see them every day. This method helps me remind me of tasks I need to complete and improve my efficiency. For example, I often write down appointments or shopping lists to stay organized and avoid missing anything important.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子较长且部分表达重复,建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget information easily. For instance, at school, I sometimes struggle to recall details from books assigned by my teachers.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰,但可以使用更多连接词来增强连贯性,同时适当丰富词汇表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was a child, I got lost near a restaurant while with my parents. Unfortunately, I couldn't remember their phone numbers and didn't have my phone, so I couldn't contact them. It was quite scary; however, a kind stranger helped me find them.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了语法错误和不完整句子,建议注意句子完整性和准确性,同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember many important details, especially key points from my homework. Besides that, I often recall calculations because I enjoy playing computer games that require quick thinking and problem-solving skills.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构合理,但存在重复表达,建议避免重复并使用更多连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Because of my poor memory, I prefer to write important notes and stick them on the door where I can see them daily. This method helps me remember tasks and improve my efficiency. For example, I write down appointments and shopping lists to stay organized and avoid missing anything important.
× I went to a restaurant with my parents but I got lost at the corner.
✓ I went to a restaurant with my parents but I got lost around the corner.
介词“at the corner”通常用于表示具体的角落位置,而在这里表达迷路的意思时,应该用“around the corner”表示在拐角附近迷路。
× This method helps me remind me of tasks I need to complete and improve my efficiency.
✓ This method helps me remember tasks I need to complete and improve my efficiency.
句中“helps me remind me”重复使用了“me”,造成语法错误。正确表达应为“helps me remember”,即“帮助我记住”。