Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
For me, I think I'm very good at memorizing things, like in my study I can remember the vocabularies about scientific words and also for English very quickly. And in my life I can also remember the tasks from my mother or my father like asked me to doing something and I can remember them really well.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
And it really happens, but I have forgotten sometime important before. For example, once a friend asks me to met her because we hadn't seen each other for a long time. But uh, unfortunately I forgot it because I was busy with doing something about studying and it was really annoying for her and disappointing to meet this meeting. But I hope that I have if I have a chance I will meet her again.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
As a student, I have many things to remember every day. For example, in the evening I need to remember to bring my salmon home, and besides that, I also have to recall important information and knowledge from my classes to complete my schoolwork. Additionally, I have some household calls that I must do myself, so I need to keep track.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I use different approaches to remember different things. Like for example in the class I use notebooks to note down the important knowledge that our teacher are teaching us. And sometimes I also use the memorandum in my phone because it is a really convenient way to remember important thing.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了你记忆力强的观点,但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误,如“asked me to doing something”应为“asked me to do something”。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复表达,并尝试使用更多连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can quickly remember scientific vocabulary and English words. Moreover, I can easily recall tasks my parents ask me to do, which helps me manage my daily responsibilities effectively.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“asks me to met her”应为“asked me to meet her”,句子较长且不够连贯。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词提高逻辑性,并注意时态和语法的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, once a friend asked me to meet her after a long time, but I forgot because I was busy studying. I felt sorry about it and hope to meet her again soon.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,但“bring my salmon home”可能是表达错误,应为“lunch”或其他物品。建议注意用词准确性,避免用词错误,同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: As a student, I need to remember many things daily. For example, I have to bring my lunch home in the evening. Besides that, I must recall important information from my classes to finish my homework. Additionally, I have some household chores to do, so I keep track of them carefully.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,表达了多种记忆方法,但存在语法错误,如“teacher are teaching”应为“teacher is teaching”,以及“important thing”应为“important things”。建议注意主谓一致和复数形式的正确使用。
Ví dụ: I use different methods to remember important things. For example, in class, I take notes in my notebook to record key points the teacher is teaching. Sometimes, I also use the memo app on my phone because it is a very convenient way to keep track of important information.
× I can remember the vocabularies about scientific words and also for English very quickly.
✓ I can remember vocabulary about scientific words and also English very quickly.
“Vocabulary”是不可数名词,不需要加复数形式“vocabularies”。
× like asked me to doing something and I can remember them really well.
✓ like asking me to do something and I can remember them really well.
动词“ask”后面应接动名词“asking”或不定式“to do”,这里应使用“asking me to do something”。
× I have forgotten sometime important before.
✓ I have forgotten something important before.
“sometime”是副词,表示“某个时候”,应使用“something”表示“某事”。
× once a friend asks me to met her because we hadn't seen each other for a long time.
✓ once a friend asked me to meet her because we hadn't seen each other for a long time.
句子描述过去发生的事情,动词应使用过去时,“asks”改为“asked”,“met”改为“meet”。
× I was busy with doing something about studying and it was really annoying for her and disappointing to meet this meeting.
✓ I was busy doing something about studying and it was really annoying for her and disappointing to miss this meeting.
“busy”后直接接动名词,去掉“with”;“disappointing to meet this meeting”表达不当,应为“disappointing to miss this meeting”。
× But I hope that I have if I have a chance I will meet her again.
✓ But I hope that if I have a chance, I will meet her again.
句子结构混乱,应去掉多余的“have”,并加逗号使句子更通顺。
× I need to remember to bring my salmon home,
✓ I need to remember to bring my salmon home,
此句中“salmon”如果指的是鱼肉或鱼类,单复数形式相同,若指“三文鱼”作为食物,单数形式正确。若指“鲑鱼”,需根据语境判断。此处无明显错误。
× I use notebooks to note down the important knowledge that our teacher are teaching us.
✓ I use notebooks to note down the important knowledge that our teacher is teaching us.
主语“teacher”是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“is”。
× I also use the memorandum in my phone because it is a really convenient way to remember important thing.
✓ I also use the memorandum in my phone because it is a really convenient way to remember important things.
“thing”应使用复数形式“things”,因为指多个重要事项。