Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
OK, I believe I'm not that. Memorize something, you know, I always forget that. That they do submit my assignments and actually this ability always be useful, but I just cannot memorize.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Multiple tasks I didn't manage my time.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
OK. I think the most important thing is that you should memorize. The first time you post your friends and your parents besides, another important thing is you should be. But there's a deadline for different assignment and projects.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually use my phone to write a reminder about this important thing. Roommates to remind me about some important guidelines.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达不自然,且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget them. For example, I sometimes forget to submit my assignments on time, which shows that memorising is a useful skill I need to improve.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且不完整,缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议直接回答问题并补充具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once missed a deadline because I didn't manage my time well while handling multiple tasks.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,表达不清晰。建议明确列出需要记住的具体事项,并用连词连接句子。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to contact my friends and parents regularly. Besides, I must keep track of deadlines for assignments and projects to avoid missing them.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清楚。建议完整描述记忆方法,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually use my phone to set reminders for important tasks. Additionally, my roommates sometimes help me remember important guidelines, which is very helpful.
× OK, I believe I'm not that.
✓ OK, I believe I'm not good at that.
这里的 'I'm not that' 结构不完整,缺少形容词来描述 'that',应补充形容词 'good at' 来表达完整意思。
× Memorize something, you know, I always forget that.
✓ When I memorize something, you know, I always forget it.
原句结构混乱,缺少主语和连词,导致句意不清。应使用完整句子结构表达条件和结果。
× That they do submit my assignments and actually this ability always be useful, but I just cannot memorize.
✓ They do submit my assignments, and actually this ability is always useful, but I just cannot memorize.
原句中 'That they do submit' 用法不当,且 'this ability always be useful' 动词形式错误,应改为 'is always useful'。
× Multiple tasks I didn't manage my time.
✓ I didn't manage my time because of multiple tasks.
原句缺少连词和完整句子结构,导致表达不清晰。应补充原因状语从句使句子完整。
× OK. I think the most important thing is that you should memorize.
✓ OK. I think the most important thing is what you should memorize.
原句中 'is that you should memorize' 结构不完整,缺少宾语,导致句意不明。应补充宾语从句。
× The first time you post your friends and your parents besides, another important thing is you should be.
✓ First, you should remember your friends and your parents. Besides, another important thing is that you should be aware of deadlines.
原句结构混乱,缺少谓语和逻辑连接词,导致句意不清。应拆分句子并补充完整表达。
× But there's a deadline for different assignment and projects.
✓ But there are deadlines for different assignments and projects.
'assignment' 应为复数形式 'assignments',且 'deadline' 应对应复数 'deadlines',以匹配 'different' 修饰的多个项目。
× Well, I usually use my phone to write a reminder about this important thing.
✓ Well, I usually use my phone to write reminders about important things.
'reminder' 和 'important thing' 应使用复数形式,表示多条提醒和多件重要事项。
× Roommates to remind me about some important guidelines.
✓ My roommates remind me about some important guidelines.
原句缺少主语和谓语,导致句子不完整。应补充主语 'My roommates' 和谓语动词 'remind'。