Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、より明確で自然な英語表現を使うことが必要です。また、答えが少し冗長で、簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially enjoyable memories because they make me feel happy when I recall them.

Gợi ý: 回答が途中で途切れており、文法や語彙の誤りも目立ちます。質問に対して直接的かつ完全な文で答え、理由や感情を具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my own birthday, which surprised me a lot. I felt very sad because it is an important day for me.

Gợi ý: 答えが不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な内容を簡潔に述べることを心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important events and appointments, so I often take pictures or set reminders on my smartphone.

Gợi ý: 答えは意味が伝わりますが、繰り返しや文法の誤りがあります。より自然で正確な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I often write important things in my diary because writing them down helps me remember better and I rarely forget when I do so.

× I could at remember the enjoyable memories because I like it and I feel happy when I remember it.

✓ I can remember the enjoyable memories because I like them and I feel happy when I remember them.

'Could at remember' is incorrect; 'could' is a modal verb and should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'at'. Also, 'memories' is plural, so 'it' should be 'them'. Use 'can' to express ability in present tense here.

× Yes I did. Speaking honest, I forget about my birthday.

✓ Yes, I did. To be honest, I forgot about my birthday.

'Speaking honest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'To be honest'. 'Forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past event.

× I can't believe it, but I do Umm, I was. I became so sad because.

✓ I can't believe it, but I did. Umm, I was very sad because of that.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'I do' should be 'I did' to match past tense. 'I was' needs completion, and 'I became so sad because' requires an object or reason.

× I prefer the the taking picture because nowadays we can easily to take a Photo by our smartphones so and then it can be re rewatching so I we can re recovering easier.

✓ I prefer taking pictures because nowadays we can easily take photos with our smartphones, and then we can rewatch them, so we can recover memories more easily.

'The the taking picture' is incorrect; 'taking pictures' is the correct form. 'Easily to take' should be 'easily take'. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos'. 'Re rewatching' is redundant; 'rewatch' is sufficient. 'Re recovering' is incorrect; 'recover' is the correct verb here.

× I often write down on my diary diary because it's useful to recall it and I never forget when I write to paper with pencil.

✓ I often write in my diary because it's useful to recall things, and I never forget when I write on paper with a pencil.

'Write down on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'write in' for diaries. 'Write to paper' should be 'write on paper'. Also, 'diary diary' is repetitive. 'A pencil' needs an article.