Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, actually, to say the truth, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For instance, every time at school I forget something such as my pencil case, my books or textbooks, and my mom jokes and say that the only thing I haven't forgotten is my backpack and myself.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
No, at least not in my memory. All the things that I forget are mainly minor issues such as small gadgets, my phone, my pencil case, textbooks and those things that you usually forget, not major issues such as a test or when to wake up.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In my daily life, I have to constantly repeat to myself not to forget to concentrate on my work. A lot of kids get distracted when they're working, for example fidgeting with things in their hands. However, I need to remind myself to be more concentrated on my work.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
My method of remembering important things is actually pretty unique. When I try to remember important things, I usually repeat the event to myself three times and then if I really will forget it, I would write it on a list and try to remind myself to put the list in some place that I could easily see.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体,但句子较长且有些冗余。建议简化表达,避免重复,同时注意语法细节,如“jokes and say”应为“jokes and says”。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget my pencil case or textbooks at school. My mom even jokes that the only thing I never forget is my backpack.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰且结构合理,但部分表达略显重复,如“small gadgets, my phone, my pencil case, textbooks and those things that you usually forget”。建议使用更简洁的表达并增加连接词。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't forgotten anything important. Usually, I only forget minor things like my phone or pencil case, but never something serious like a test or an appointment.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但有些重复“concentrate on my work”。建议使用更多连接词使句子更流畅,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to stay focused on my work. Many kids get distracted by fidgeting, so I remind myself to concentrate and avoid distractions.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰且内容具体,但部分表达不够自然,如“if I really will forget it”。建议调整语法并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: My way of remembering important things is to repeat them to myself three times. If I still think I might forget, I write them down on a list and place it somewhere visible.
× When I try to remember important things, I usually repeat the event to myself three times and then if I really will forget it, I would write it on a list and try to remind myself to put the list in some place that I could easily see.
✓ When I try to remember important things, I usually repeat the event to myself three times and then if I really forget it, I write it on a list and try to remind myself to put the list in some place that I can easily see.
这里的条件句使用了“if I really will forget it”,这是不正确的。条件句中一般不使用将来时态,应该用一般现在时“if I really forget it”。此外,后半句的“would write”改为一般现在时“write”,保持时态一致。建议在条件句中使用一般现在时,主句根据语境使用适当时态。