MemoryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. I have a knack for memorizing things. I can easily recall some vivid moments in every stage of my life, like the gift my mother gave me, my job elevations and my highest score got from my class, and so on.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Oh yes, last month I forgot my mother's birthday because I was swamped at work. I remembered it the next day. It made me so guilty. So I immediately bought her a bouquet of roses and a necklace. Of course she forgave me, but I still felt so bad those days.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I have to remember simple but essential things like grabbing my key before leaving, preparing food for my little kid, and submitting my report every day when I finish work.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I have a few tricks. First, I ask my husband to remind me of the essential things that related to both of us, like audio, restaurants and booking tickets in advance. Second, for daily tasks, I write them on my notes and stick notes on my laptop. This way I won't miss any responsibilities.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 7.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 7.0Phát âm: 7.0Ngữ pháp: 6.5Từ vựng: 7.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容丰富,但“and so on”显得不够具体,建议避免使用模糊表达,增加具体细节,使回答更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I have a knack for memorizing things. For example, I can easily recall vivid moments such as the gift my mother gave me on my birthday, the times I was promoted at work, and the highest score I achieved in my class.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且连贯,但可以使用更多连接词来增强逻辑性,同时避免重复表达“felt so guilty”和“felt so bad”。

Ví dụ: Oh yes, last month I forgot my mother's birthday because I was swamped at work. However, I remembered it the next day, which made me feel very guilty. Therefore, I immediately bought her a bouquet of roses and a necklace. Fortunately, she forgave me, but I still felt bad for a few days.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 88.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以通过添加连接词和稍微扩展细节,使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I have to remember simple but essential things in my daily life. For instance, I always make sure to grab my keys before leaving, prepare food for my little kid, and submit my work report every day after finishing my tasks.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 87.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但部分表达不够准确,如“things that related to both of us”应为“things that are related to both of us”,建议注意语法准确性并丰富词汇。

Ví dụ: I have a few tricks to remember important things. First, I ask my husband to remind me of essential matters that are related to both of us, such as booking restaurants or tickets in advance. Second, for daily tasks, I write them down on notes and stick them on my laptop. This way, I won't miss any responsibilities.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I can easily recall some vivid moments in every stage of my life, like the gift my mother gave me, my job elevations and my highest score got from my class, and so on.

I can easily recall some vivid moments in every stage of my life, like the gift my mother gave me, my job elevation and my highest score I got from my class, and so on.

“job elevations”应为单数“job elevation”,因为这里指的是职位提升的单一事件。

Past tense issue

× my highest score got from my class

my highest score I got from my class

“got”前缺少主语,应补充“I”使句子完整,且保持过去时态。

Past tense issue

× I was swamped at work.

I was swamped with work.

“swamped”后应接介词“with”表示被工作淹没,原句介词使用错误。

Present tense issue

× I have to remember simple but essential things like grabbing my key before leaving, preparing food for my little kid, and submitting my report every day when I finish work.

I have to remember simple but essential things like grabbing my keys before leaving, preparing food for my little kid, and submitting my report every day when I finish work.

“key”应为复数“keys”,因为通常人们有多把钥匙,且符合语境。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I ask my husband to remind me of the essential things that related to both of us, like audio, restaurants and booking tickets in advance.

I ask my husband to remind me of the essential things that are related to both of us, like audio, restaurants and booking tickets in advance.

“that related to”缺少系动词“are”,应补充以构成完整的定语从句。

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LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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