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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

No, I'm not good at memorizing things. I often forget where I put my phones and keys, and I usually struggle memorizing faces and names. I often rely on notes and reminders to keep track of my things.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. Several days ago I picked my and iPad to my back, but on my way back home I realized that I just take my iPad but not my phone. So I had to go back to the place I originally went.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

In daily life, it's important to remember to stay organized and manage time efficiently, so I keep to make a plan at the beginning of my routine daily routine.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I usually make a list at the beginning of the day. It not only improve my efficiency but also keeps me remember the important thing and when I complete one thing I will cross it off.

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Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但存在语法错误(如phones应为phone),且表达略显重复。建议注意单复数形式,避免重复表达,并尝试使用更多连接词使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget where I put my phone or keys. Therefore, I usually rely on notes and reminders to help me keep track of my belongings.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如“picked my and iPad to my back”不通顺,且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础,使用正确的句型表达经历,并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. A few days ago, I took my iPad with me but forgot my phone. When I realized this on my way home, I had to go back to the place I had been to get it.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰,存在语法错误和重复(如"routine daily routine")。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: In daily life, I need to remember to stay organized and manage my time well. Therefore, I usually make a plan at the start of each day to help me stay on track.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误(如improve应为improves,keeps me remember应为helps me remember),且表达略显重复。建议注意主谓一致,使用正确的短语,并丰富词汇表达。

Ví dụ: To remember important things, I usually make a list at the beginning of the day. This not only improves my efficiency but also helps me remember tasks, and I cross off each item once it's done.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I often forget where I put my phones and keys, and I usually struggle memorizing faces and names.

I often forget where I put my phone and keys, and I usually struggle memorizing faces and names.

phones 应为单数 phone,因为通常人只有一部手机。复数形式在此处不合适。

Past tense issue

× Several days ago I picked my and iPad to my back, but on my way back home I realized that I just take my iPad but not my phone.

Several days ago I picked up my phone and iPad to take with me, but on my way back home I realized that I had taken my iPad but not my phone.

picked my and iPad to my back 结构不正确,应为 picked up my phone and iPad。后半句时态不一致,realized 后应使用过去完成时 had taken。

Past tense issue

× So I had to go back to the place I originally went.

So I had to go back to the place I had originally been.

原句中 originally went 用法不当,地点应使用 been,且时态应为过去完成时以表示先发生的动作。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× so I keep to make a plan at the beginning of my routine daily routine.

so I keep making a plan at the beginning of my daily routine.

keep 后应接动名词 making,且 daily routine 前不应重复使用 routine。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It not only improve my efficiency but also keeps me remember the important thing and when I complete one thing I will cross it off.

It not only improves my efficiency but also helps me remember important things, and when I complete one, I cross it off.

improve 应为第三人称单数 improves;keeps me remember 结构错误,应为 helps me remember;important thing 应为复数 important things;句子中逗号和连接词使用需调整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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