Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Not really, I just remember the things that I really interested in, like for example in my study and some topics that I interested in so I can remember like more details than.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's quite often in my life because I'm not a detailed person, so I always forget something like a little detail in some some story. For example, when I went to this place and I have been there before, but I just like oh, I.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
First of all, I think I should remember to keep my key before I go out to work, because if I forgot it, it would be like got me in trouble sometimes, so I don't want to forgot anything like.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
When I was a kid, I would write it in the post it and mark it in there in every corner that I can see to Remember Me, remind me that not to forget it. So it helped me a lot.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I am not very good at memorising things, but I tend to remember topics that interest me, such as my studies, because I pay more attention to them.'
Ví dụ: I am not very good at memorising things, but I tend to remember topics that interest me, such as my studies, because I pay more attention to them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full response with a clear example. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Yes, I often forget important things because I am not very detail-oriented. For instance, I once visited a place I had been to before, but I forgot some important details about it.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I often forget important things because I am not very detail-oriented. For instance, I once visited a place I had been to before, but I forgot some important details about it.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Try to complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Also, add linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, 'First of all, I need to remember to take my keys before I go to work because forgetting them can cause problems. Therefore, I try not to forget anything important.'
Ví dụ: First of all, I need to remember to take my keys before I go to work because forgetting them can cause problems. Therefore, I try not to forget anything important.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using better vocabulary and clearer structure. For example, 'When I was a child, I used to write important notes on sticky notes and place them in visible spots around my room to remind me not to forget. This method helped me a lot.'
Ví dụ: When I was a child, I used to write important notes on sticky notes and place them in visible spots around my room to remind me not to forget. This method helped me a lot.
× Not really, I just remember the things that I really interested in, like for example in my study and some topics that I interested in so I can remember like more details than.
✓ Not really, I just remember the things that I am really interested in, like for example in my study and some topics that I am interested in so I can remember more details than others.
The error is the omission of the verb 'am' after the pronoun 'I' in the relative clause. In English, when using 'I' with a present continuous or state verb like 'interested', the verb 'am' is necessary to form the correct structure 'I am interested'. Without it, the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Also, 'than' should be followed by a comparison object, so 'others' is added for clarity.
× Yes, it's quite often in my life because I'm not a detailed person, so I always forget something like a little detail in some some story. For example, when I went to this place and I have been there before, but I just like oh, I.
✓ Yes, it has happened quite often in my life because I'm not a detailed person, so I always forget little details in some stories. For example, when I went to this place and I had been there before, but I just thought, oh, I...
The sentence mixes past simple and present perfect incorrectly. 'It's quite often' should be 'it has happened quite often' to indicate past occurrences. 'I have been there before' should be 'I had been there before' to maintain past perfect tense when referring to an event before another past event. Also, 'some some story' is corrected to 'some stories' for plural consistency.
× First of all, I think I should remember to keep my key before I go out to work, because if I forgot it, it would be like got me in trouble sometimes, so I don't want to forgot anything like.
✓ First of all, I think I should remember to keep my key before I go out to work, because if I forget it, it would get me into trouble sometimes, so I don't want to forget anything.
The verb tense is inconsistent; 'if I forgot' should be 'if I forget' to match the conditional present tense. 'It would be like got me in trouble' is incorrect; it should be 'it would get me into trouble' to express the consequence properly. Also, 'forgot' at the end should be 'forget' to maintain the infinitive form after 'want to'.
× When I was a kid, I would write it in the post it and mark it in there in every corner that I can see to Remember Me, remind me that not to forget it. So it helped me a lot.
✓ When I was a kid, I would write it on a post-it and mark it in every corner that I could see to remind me not to forget it. So it helped me a lot.
'Write it in the post it' is incorrect; it should be 'write it on a post-it' because we write on surfaces. 'That I can see' should be 'that I could see' to maintain past tense consistency. 'To Remember Me, remind me that not to forget it' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'to remind me not to forget it' for clarity and correct infinitive usage.