Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ немного длинный и содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки, например, "this field disease" лучше заменить на "such diseases". Также стоит использовать более естественные выражения и избегать излишней информации, не связанной напрямую с вопросом.

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually write down important information to help me remember. I also try to exercise my brain regularly to keep it healthy.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений, например, "I can be forgotten easily" лучше заменить на "I might forget easily". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для улучшения связности речи.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often forget important things, so I keep my notes nearby and set notifications to remind me about important tasks.

Gợi ý: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и неясные выражения, например, "any daily lifetime" не понятно. Лучше использовать более простые и точные формулировки, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: I usually set a goal to complete at least four to six tasks each day because life is busy, and it's easy to forget things without planning.

Gợi ý: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность, используя более разнообразные связующие слова. Также стоит избегать повторов, например, "again" и "prefer" можно заменить для разнообразия.

Ví dụ: I usually write important things down to help me remember and track my progress. Additionally, I set notifications on my devices to remind me of urgent tasks.

× Unfortunately, I'm not so good at memorizing things, so I prefer to write down any important information that I have to remember.

✓ Unfortunately, I'm not so good at memorising things, so I prefer to write down any important information that I have to remember.

The word 'memorizing' is the American English spelling, while 'memorising' is British English. Since the question uses 'memorising', it is better to keep consistent spelling. This is not a grammar error but a style consistency issue.

× However, I understand that actually I need to exercise my brain to avoid Alzheimer's or any type of this field disease.

✓ However, I understand that actually I need to exercise my brain to avoid Alzheimer's or any type of disease in this field.

The phrase 'any type of this field disease' is incorrect. The preposition 'in' should be used to indicate the category or field of disease. The correct phrase is 'any type of disease in this field'.

× It happens to me quite often, so usually I keep my notes close to me so I understand what I can be forgotten easily and I prefer to set notifications on any important information that I have to recently come through.

✓ It happens to me quite often, so usually I keep my notes close to me so I understand what I can easily forget and I prefer to set notifications for any important information that I have to recently come across.

The phrase 'what I can be forgotten easily' is incorrect; the correct form is 'what I can easily forget' because 'forget' is an active verb here. Also, 'come through' should be 'come across' to mean encountering information. Prepositions 'on' should be 'for' when setting notifications.

× Usually I set a goal to fulfill for at least 4 but better six tasks per day and I have to remember to fulfill it because nowadays our day overwhelmed with a lot of different tasks and it's really easy to forget any daily lifetime.

✓ Usually I set a goal to fulfill at least 4, but preferably six, tasks per day and I have to remember to fulfill them because nowadays our days are overwhelmed with a lot of different tasks and it's really easy to forget any daily life tasks.

The sentence has several issues: 'goal to fulfill for at least 4 but better six tasks' is awkward; better to say 'at least 4, but preferably six, tasks'. 'Fulfill it' should be 'fulfill them' because 'tasks' is plural. 'Our day overwhelmed' needs a verb 'are' to be correct. 'Any daily lifetime' is incorrect; 'daily life tasks' or 'daily tasks' is appropriate.

× I usually write them down again and it's easier for me to remember and to keep track of what I've done and what should be done ASAP.

✓ I usually write them down again and it's easier for me to remember and to keep track of what I've done and what should be done as soon as possible.

The abbreviation 'ASAP' is informal and should be expanded in formal speech. No pronoun error here, but improving clarity and formality is suggested.

× So again, I prefer to set notifications and use our current gadgets to help us in this task.

✓ So again, I prefer to set notifications and use my current gadgets to help me in this task.

The pronouns 'our' and 'us' are incorrect because the speaker is talking about their own gadgets and help. The correct pronouns are 'my' and 'me'.