Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了记忆力强的观点，但部分句子结构不够自然，且有些表达不够准确。建议注意语法和表达的准确性，例如“recognizing people's face”应为“recognizing people's faces”，“record their names even”表达不清晰。可以适当使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe I have a strong memory. For instance, I can easily remember important numbers and dates, which helps me stay organized. Moreover, I am good at recognizing people's faces and remembering their names after meeting them just once.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为具体，但最后一句“prepared another spell”表达不清楚，可能是用词错误。建议使用更准确的词汇表达补救措施，并注意句子连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, although I usually have a strong memory, I sometimes forget important things. For example, last year I forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel very guilty. I sincerely apologized to her and prepared a special gift to make up for it.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但“license”一词用法不明确，建议使用更准确的词汇。可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember several things. For example, I have to keep track of my work schedule, including meetings and deadlines, as well as homework assignments for my students at home. Besides that, I also need to prepare meals for my daughter and complete household chores on time.

Gợi ý: 回答表达清晰且内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达“remember important things”。

Ví dụ: I usually make a list on my phone because there are many useful apps that help me remember important tasks and send timely reminders. This method is very convenient and efficient for managing my daily schedule.

× And I'm good at recognizing people's face and record their names even.

✓ And I'm good at recognizing people's faces and recording their names even.

这里的face应该用复数faces，因为people是复数，face需要与之对应。record应改为动名词形式recording，因为前面是介词at，后面动词应用动名词形式。

× I just admire them for once.

✓ I just admired them once.

句子描述过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式admiried。for once表达不准确，改为once更合适。

× I apologized to her sincerely and I prepared another spell.

✓ I apologized to her sincerely and prepared another spell.

两个动作都发生在过去，prepared应使用过去式。去掉第二个主语I，使句子更简洁。

× For example, I have to keep track of my work schedule like meetings, license, and homework assignments for my students at home.

✓ For example, I have to keep track of my work schedule like meetings, licenses, and homework assignments for my students at home.

license应为复数licenses，因为前面列举了多个事项，保持一致。

× And I'm good at recognizing people's face and record their names even.

✓ And I'm good at recognizing people's faces and recording their names even.

介词at后面应接动名词形式，record应改为recording。

× I usually make a list on my phone because there are many useful apps that help me to remember important things and send me timely reminders so I won't forget it.

✓ I usually make a list on my phone because there are many useful apps that help me remember important things and send me timely reminders so I won't forget them.

help后面不需要to，去掉to。forget后面指代复数important things，应使用复数代词them。