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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I found that I can always remember a lot of things that happened when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

No, I haven't. I found I often remember the things detailed, even the something important.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I need to remember what I need to eat in the breakfast and my and today I learn new knowledge and have I forgot the homework?

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I will always record these things again and again, so it's slightly become very clearly in my mind.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免语法错误,如将“memorizing”拼写统一,并且回答应更直接,避免冗余。可以增加具体例子来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I can easily recall details from my childhood, such as family trips and school events.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,如“the something important”不合适。建议用更自然的表达方式,并提供具体例子说明。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't forgotten anything important. I usually remember important dates like my friends' birthdays and appointments.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多,建议先理清思路,使用完整句子表达,并且避免重复和混乱。可以列举具体需要记住的事项。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember what to eat for breakfast, the new things I learn at school, and whether I have finished my homework.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰,语法错误影响理解。建议使用更准确的表达方式,说明具体方法,并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually write down important things repeatedly, so they become clear in my mind and I don't forget them.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I found I often remember the things detailed, even the something important.

I found I often remember things in detail, even something important.

这里的错误是量词使用不当。'the things detailed' 应改为 'things in detail',表示详细地记得事情;'the something important' 中 'the' 不应与 'something' 连用,应直接用 'something important'。建议去掉多余的定冠词,正确表达数量和限定。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I need to remember what I need to eat in the breakfast and my and today I learn new knowledge and have I forgot the homework?

I need to remember what I need to eat for breakfast, and today I learned new knowledge. Did I forget the homework?

错误包括介词使用不当和句子结构混乱。'in the breakfast' 应改为 'for breakfast',表示吃早餐;'my and today I learn new knowledge' 语序和连接词错误,应拆分为两个句子;'have I forgot' 时态和语序错误,应为 'Did I forget'。建议理清句子结构,正确使用介词和时态。

Incorrect adverb placement

× I will always record these things again and again, so it's slightly become very clearly in my mind.

I always record these things again and again, so they become very clear in my mind.

副词位置错误和句子结构不当。'slightly become very clearly' 语法错误,'slightly'(稍微)和 'very clearly'(非常清楚)矛盾且用法错误,应去掉 'slightly','clearly' 应用形容词 'clear' 修饰 'things'。建议调整副词位置,使用正确的形容词形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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