MemoryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Well, I'd say I'm pretty average. I can remember simple things without too much trouble, but it comes to complex or academic stuff. Maybe I need to put in more effort and now I try to bring to access my brain to remember more.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, unfortunately once I went to the new campus to accomplish my experiment, I completely forgot to bring my study card. I only realized it when I took the way to the new campus, but in the end, the professor let me in.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Well, the most thing for me is to set my alarm every night. If I forget, there's no way I wake up on time for class. More importantly, I need to remember to charge my device like my phone and laptop. If not, I will not finish my work in time.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Well, to be honest, I rely a lot on my phone, so I often write down something in my notebook app and make several reminders, sometimes starting a few days in advance. That way I keep seeing them and not forget.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答时表达不够自然,句子结构有些混乱,尤其是“bring to access my brain”表达不清晰。建议简化表达,使用更自然的短语,并且避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I'm fairly average at memorising things. I can easily remember simple information, but when it comes to complex or academic material, I find it more challenging. Therefore, I try to focus more and use techniques like repetition to improve my memory.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但部分表达不够地道,如“accomplish my experiment”和“took the way”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意时态和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, once I went to the new campus to do an experiment, but I completely forgot to bring my student card. I only realized it on the way there, but luckily the professor allowed me to enter.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“the most thing”和“there's no way I wake up”。建议注意句子结构,使用更准确的表达,同时可以增加连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: The most important thing I need to remember every day is to set my alarm at night. If I forget, I won't wake up on time for class. Also, I have to remember to charge my devices, like my phone and laptop, otherwise I can't finish my work on time.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较好,但“write down something”表达不够具体,且结尾“not forget”缺少主语。建议使用更具体的词汇和完整句子,使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: To remember important things, I usually rely on my phone. I write notes in my notebook app and set multiple reminders, sometimes starting a few days before the event. This way, I keep seeing the notifications and don't forget important tasks.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Maybe I need to put in more effort and now I try to bring to access my brain to remember more.

Maybe I need to put in more effort and now I try to access my brain to remember more.

这里的错误是多余的介词“to”出现在动词“bring”和“access”之间,正确用法是直接使用动词“access”,不需要“bring to”。建议去掉“bring to”,简化表达。

Past tense issue

× I only realized it when I took the way to the new campus, but in the end, the professor let me in.

I only realized it when I was on the way to the new campus, but in the end, the professor let me in.

“took the way”是不正确的表达,应该用“was on the way”表示“在去新校园的路上”。这里需要用过去进行时态表达动作发生的背景。

Singular and plural issue

× Well, the most thing for me is to set my alarm every night.

Well, the most important thing for me is to set my alarm every night.

“the most thing”是不正确的表达,应该是“the most important thing”,这里缺少形容词修饰名词。

Modal verb usage

× If I forget, there's no way I wake up on time for class.

If I forget, there's no way I will wake up on time for class.

“there's no way I wake up”中缺少情态动词“will”表示将来时态,正确表达是“there's no way I will wake up”。

Modal verb usage

× If not, I will not finish my work in time.

If not, I will not be able to finish my work in time.

“I will not finish”虽然语法正确,但表达不够准确,建议使用“will not be able to finish”更清楚地表达“无法完成”的意思。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Well, to be honest, I rely a lot on my phone, so I often write down something in my notebook app and make several reminders, sometimes starting a few days in advance.

Well, to be honest, I rely a lot on my phone, so I often write down things in my notebook app and make several reminders, sometimes starting a few days in advance.

“write down something”在这里不太自然,应该用复数“things”表示多项内容,更符合语境。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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