Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“believe am pretty good”应为“believe I am pretty good”，“remember”应为“remembering”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。同时，避免使用口语填充词如“you know”，并且回答应更完整，避免句子未完结。

Ví dụ: Actually, I believe I am quite good at memorizing things, especially numbers. For example, I can easily remember ID card numbers or telephone numbers. However, I find it more difficult to memorize words or long texts.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子不完整，表达不连贯，且存在语法错误，如“send”应为“sent”。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免重复表达“I still remember”，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my ID card during a trip to Xiamen. I left it in the minibus while transferring, but fortunately, the hotel owner found it and sent it back to me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“the L exam”应具体说明考试名称，“tasks you know”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: Recently, I have been preparing for the IELTS exam. Every day, I need to remember various tasks, such as practicing listening and writing. Therefore, I divide my day into different parts to focus on each skill effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“when it's come to”应为“when it comes to”，“I even would tell”表达不自然。建议避免口语填充词，注意句子完整性和语法正确性。

Ví dụ: Generally, I write important things in my notebook or save them in the notes app on my phone. For very important matters, I also tell my friends or parents to help me remember, just in case I forget.

× Actually, I believe am pretty good at memorizing things, but I'm good at, you know, remember some numbers rather than word.

✓ Actually, I believe I am pretty good at memorizing things, but I'm good at, you know, remembering some numbers rather than words.

句子中缺少主语“I”，导致句子结构不完整；另外，动词“remember”应使用动名词形式“remembering”来与前面的“good at”搭配；“word”应为复数形式“words”，因为表示泛指多个单词。

× I'm pretty good at remember numbers such as ID cards or telephone numbers.

✓ I'm pretty good at remembering numbers such as ID cards or telephone numbers.

介词“at”后面应接动名词形式，因此“remember”应改为“remembering”。

× But when it comes to memorizing.

✓ But when it comes to memorizing,

该句为不完整句，缺少后续内容或应与下一句合并，需补充完整或调整标点。

× I still remember that I forgot my ID card during a trip to Xiamen and I still remember it's like uh, in the transit and I forgot my ID card in the minibus, but fortunately the owner of the hotel send it to me even though at that time I.

✓ I still remember that I forgot my ID card during a trip to Xiamen. I still remember it was, uh, in the transit, and I forgot my ID card in the minibus, but fortunately the owner of the hotel sent it to me even though at that time I...

句子过长且结构混乱，应拆分为多个句子；“send”应使用过去式“sent”与前文时态一致；“it's like”应改为“it was”以符合过去时态。

× So every day I need to remember my daily tasks, tasks you know such as listening parts or the writing tasks.

✓ So every day I need to remember my daily tasks, you know, such as listening parts or writing tasks.

“tasks”重复出现，冗余；“the writing tasks”中“the”不必要，应去掉；“listening parts”与“writing tasks”保持一致的表达形式。

× I need to divide my day into different part and focus on different study parts.

✓ I need to divide my day into different parts and focus on different study parts.

“part”应为复数形式“parts”，因为前面有“different”修饰，表示多个部分。

× You know the note apps when it's come to very important thing.

✓ You know, the note apps when it comes to very important things.

“when it's come to”应为“when it comes to”，动词应为第三人称单数现在时；“thing”应为复数“things”，表示泛指。

× I even would tell my friends or parents just in case I forget or I didn't hear the.

✓ I would even tell my friends or parents just in case I forget or didn't hear it.

“I even would”调整为更自然的“I would even”；“I didn't hear the”缺少宾语，补充为“it”；“forget”保持一般现在时，因为是习惯性动作。