Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
In the past I can memorize things very clearly, but now I'm not very good at it.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had forgot one exam. That was an awful experience.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Yeah, like daily routines and some like some deadlines. I think there are something that I really have to remember.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Sometimes I would take some notes and I will review those notes and cross them out if I made one thing done.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了过去和现在的对比,但语法错误影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式,例如使用过去时态描述过去的能力。
Ví dụ: I used to be good at memorising things, but now I find it more difficult.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答简短且有语法错误,'had forgot'应为'forgot'。建议使用正确的时态,并适当扩展细节,使回答更具体和连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important exam, which was a terrible experience because I wasn't prepared.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地列举具体内容,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: I need to remember daily routines and important deadlines to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了方法,但时态混用且句子结构不够自然。建议统一时态,使用更自然的表达,并适当使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I usually take notes and review them regularly; when I complete a task, I cross it out to keep track.
× In the past I can memorize things very clearly, but now I'm not very good at it.
✓ In the past I could memorize things very clearly, but now I'm not very good at it.
这里谈论过去的能力,应该用情态动词的过去式 'could',而不是现在时 'can'。建议将 'can' 改为 'could',以符合过去时态的语境。
× Yes, I had forgot one exam.
✓ Yes, I had forgotten one exam.
'had forgot' 是错误的过去完成时形式,正确的过去分词是 'forgotten'。建议将 'forgot' 改为 'forgotten',以构成正确的过去完成时。
× I think there are something that I really have to remember.
✓ I think there is something that I really have to remember.
'something' 是不可数单数名词,前面应该用单数形式 'is',而不是复数 'are'。建议将 'are' 改为 'is',以保持主谓一致。
× Sometimes I would take some notes and I will review those notes and cross them out if I made one thing done.
✓ Sometimes I would take some notes and I will review those notes and cross them out if I have done something.
'made one thing done' 结构不正确,应该用完成时态表达已经完成的动作,建议改为 'have done something',使句子更自然且语法正确。