Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorizing things”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe I am good at memorizing things. My cousins often say that I have a photographic memory because I can remember even small and simple details easily.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且内容混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的时态和词汇，并提供具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my anniversary, which was a disaster. My girlfriend was very angry, and I learned to be more careful about remembering important dates.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“should to remember”应为“should remember”，且表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I think it's important to remember two things: first, the time I have arranged to meet others; and second, what I need to do during those meetings.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达如何利用技术帮助记忆。

Ví dụ: Thanks to technology, I usually make lists and record important things on my phone. I also add reminders to my calendar app to help me remember important tasks.

× My cousins always say I'm human shaped recording machine so I'm really good at memory things, even something small and simple.

✓ My cousins always say I'm a human-shaped recording machine, so I'm really good at memorizing things, even small and simple ones.

这里“human shaped recording machine”缺少冠词“a”，且“memory things”应为“memorizing things”或“things to remember”，表示记忆的对象。复数形式“things”需要与动词搭配正确。

× Well unfortunately it is a disaster for a man to forgot my anniversary and so it is and I think my girlfriend will get angry but it is lucky to see something.

✓ Well, unfortunately, it is a disaster for a man to forget my anniversary, and so it is. I think my girlfriend will get angry, but luckily I haven't forgotten anything yet.

“to forgot”应为不定式“to forget”，动词不定式后用原形。句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。

× In my daily life, I think there are two important things we all should to remember.

✓ In my daily life, I think there are two important things we all should remember.

“should”后面直接接动词原形，不需要“to”。

× As for me, the 1st is to remember the time we arranged to meet with others and the the second thing is to remember what what you should do in that.

✓ As for me, the first is to remember the time we arranged to meet with others, and the second thing is to remember what you should do then.

“the 1st”应写为“the first”，重复“the”应去掉，“what what”重复，应去掉一个，“in that”应改为“then”或“at that time”。

× Well, thanks to the development of technologies I used, I am accustomed to lists, to list, to possess, to record these things into my phones and aid them into calendar so my phones could.

✓ Well, thanks to the development of technology I use, I am accustomed to making lists, recording these things on my phone, and adding them to the calendar so my phone can remind me.

“technologies I used”时态不对，应为现在时“technology I use”；“accustomed to”后应接动名词形式；“to list, to possess”用法错误，应改为“making lists”；“record these things into my phones”应为“record these things on my phone”；“aid them into calendar”表达不当，应为“add them to the calendar”；“phones”应为单数“phone”，且句子不完整需补充。