Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
I'm not good at memorizing things. I always forgot to do something or to eat something or to drink something.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. Uh, last time I forgot to do my homework so. Uh-huh. Uh huh. Hee hee. Whoa.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need to remember like buying groceries to pay rent and to pay the electricity fees, water fees and my credit card fees.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I remember important things by using calendar to help me to remember. I will mark them down in my calendar like a paying rent on 8th of July and paying credit card payment.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“forgot”应为“forget”,并且回答应更自然流畅,避免重复和语气词。可以简洁明了地表达观点,并适当举例说明。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget to take my medicine or complete small tasks on time.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏具体细节且有过多无意义的语气词,影响表达的连贯性和自然性。应直接回答问题,并补充具体细节说明。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot to do my homework because I was very busy with other assignments, which made me realize the importance of managing my time better.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为完整,但表达不够流畅,缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯,并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to buy groceries, pay the rent, and settle bills like electricity, water, and credit card payments.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答基本清晰,但有语法错误和重复表达。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并适当扩展细节,使回答更自然。
Ví dụ: I use a calendar app on my phone to keep track of important dates. For instance, I mark the rent payment due on the 8th of July and credit card payment deadlines to avoid forgetting them.
× I always forgot to do something or to eat something or to drink something.
✓ I always forget to do something or to eat something or to drink something.
句子中使用了"always"表示习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时,而不是过去时。"forgot"是过去时,应该改为"forget"。
× I need to remember like buying groceries to pay rent and to pay the electricity fees, water fees and my credit card fees.
✓ I need to remember things like buying groceries, paying rent, and paying the electricity fees, water fees, and my credit card fees.
动词后面接动名词时,应该保持形式一致。原句中"to pay rent"和"buying groceries"形式不一致,应该统一为动名词形式。
× I remember important things by using calendar to help me to remember.
✓ I remember important things by using a calendar to help me remember.
"calendar"前缺少冠词,应该加不定冠词"a"。此外,"help me to remember"中"to"可以省略,更自然。
× I will mark them down in my calendar like a paying rent on 8th of July and paying credit card payment.
✓ I will mark them down in my calendar, like paying rent on the 8th of July and paying the credit card payment.
"a paying rent"中"a"使用错误,应该去掉。日期前应加定冠词"the"。此外,"credit card payment"前应加定冠词"the"。