Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Well, I think I'm quite good at memorizing things IK, specially when it comes to important. A tasks like exams or presentations, I can't remember K points and details clearly which makes me performance well in those situations.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, that's a lot. For instance, I over left my case at home when I went out, which makes me. A lot of inconvenience because I cannot go enter my house easily. Since then I often check my belongings and many times in order to. Avoid similar situations.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Well, I need to remember many important things. Specially related to work, I have to keep tracks of deadlines and work schedule to avoid missing anything important tasks.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually remember things by writing them down on my notes or using digital apps on my phone. Or thanks to those matters. Avoid forgetting anything important all atede and eyes and additionally I find it that are repeating things and is also.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,影响了答案的自然流畅性。建议简化句子结构,避免使用不完整或错误的短语,并且注意拼写和语法的准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things, especially important tasks like exams or presentations. I can remember key points and details clearly, which helps me perform well in those situations.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误,句子不完整且逻辑不连贯。建议使用完整句子,注意时态和词汇的准确使用,并且使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once left my keys at home, which caused a lot of inconvenience because I couldn't enter my house easily. Since then, I always check my belongings several times to avoid similar situations.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且有语法错误,如“keep tracks”应为“keep track”。建议丰富内容,使用更准确的表达,并且增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember many important things, especially related to work. For instance, I have to keep track of deadlines and my work schedule to avoid missing any important tasks.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在严重语法和表达混乱问题,句子不完整且难以理解。建议使用简单明了的句子,清晰表达记忆方法,并避免无意义的词汇。
Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my notes or using digital apps on my phone. Additionally, I repeat the information to myself to help remember it better.
× Well, I think I'm quite good at memorizing things IK, specially when it comes to important.
✓ Well, I think I'm quite good at memorizing things, especially when it comes to important tasks.
这里'specially'拼写错误,应为'specially',且'important'后面缺少名词,应该加上复数名词'tasks',表示重要的任务。
× A tasks like exams or presentations, I can't remember K points and details clearly which makes me performance well in those situations.
✓ Tasks like exams or presentations, I can't remember key points and details clearly, which affects my performance in those situations.
句子中'A tasks'中冠词和名词不匹配,应去掉'A';'K points'应为'key points';'makes me performance well'表达错误,应改为'affects my performance'。
× Yes, that's a lot.
✓ Yes, that happens a lot.
原句缺少谓语动词,且表达不完整,应该用现在时态表达经常发生的事情。
× For instance, I over left my case at home when I went out, which makes me.
✓ For instance, I once left my case at home when I went out, which caused me
'over left'用法错误,应改为'once left';'makes me'时态和表达不完整,应改为'caused me'。
× A lot of inconvenience because I cannot go enter my house easily.
✓ a lot of inconvenience because I cannot enter my house easily.
'go enter'重复,应该去掉'go',只用'verb enter'。
× Since then I often check my belongings and many times in order to.
✓ Since then, I often check my belongings many times in order to
句子结构不完整,'and many times'位置不当,应调整为'check my belongings many times'。
× Well, I need to remember many important things. Specially related to work, I have to keep tracks of deadlines and work schedule to avoid missing anything important tasks.
✓ Well, I need to remember many important things. Especially related to work, I have to keep track of deadlines and work schedules to avoid missing any important tasks.
'Specially'拼写错误,应为'Especially';'keep tracks'应为'keep track';'work schedule'应为复数'work schedules';'anything important tasks'搭配错误,应为'any important tasks'。
× Well, I usually remember things by writing them down on my notes or using digital apps on my phone.
✓ Well, I usually remember things by writing them down in my notes or using digital apps on my phone.
'writing down on my notes'中介词用错,应该用'in my notes'表示写在笔记里。
× Or thanks to those matters. Avoid forgetting anything important all atede and eyes and additionally I find it that are repeating things and is also.
✓ Thanks to those methods, I avoid forgetting anything important. Additionally, I find that repeating things also helps.
原句结构混乱,语义不清,需重组句子使其通顺表达意思。