Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Oh no, truly to be only is that I'm not good at never read, so sometimes I may go to something important.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Oh yeah, nothing. Miles of my most Thursday at a Really sorry for that. I apologized to her.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Oh, not tested and so I have to remember. The deadline of my arrangement and I really make A to do list of that I can remember them there.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I really make A to do list. So that I can remember them and. Whenever I come up an important idea or important things to do. I just write it down on my phone.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰,语法和表达存在较大问题,导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并使用正确的语法结构。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget what I read if I don't review it regularly.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱且不连贯,缺乏明确的主题句和支持细节。建议直接回答问题,并用具体例子说明。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important meeting last Thursday, and I felt really sorry about it. I apologized to the person involved.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅,语法错误较多。建议使用连贯的句子,明确说明需要记住的具体内容。
Ví dụ: I need to remember deadlines and appointments in my daily life, so I usually make a to-do list to keep track of them.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但句子结构简单且有断句问题。建议使用连贯的句子,并适当使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I usually make a to-do list to remember important tasks. Whenever I have an important idea or thing to do, I write it down on my phone immediately.
× Oh no, truly to be only is that I'm not good at never read, so sometimes I may go to something important.
✓ Oh no, the truth is that I'm not good at remembering, so sometimes I may forget something important.
原句结构混乱,表达不清晰。应使用正确的句子结构表达“我不擅长记忆,所以有时会忘记重要的事情”。建议简化句子,使用正确的动词和短语。
× Oh yeah, nothing. Miles of my most Thursday at a Really sorry for that. I apologized to her.
✓ Oh yeah, I have forgotten something. Last Thursday, I was really sorry for that. I apologized to her.
原句时态混乱且表达不完整。应使用过去时态描述过去发生的事情,如“我忘记了某事”,“我感到抱歉并道歉了”。建议使用完整句子并正确使用过去时态。
× Oh, not tested and so I have to remember. The deadline of my arrangement and I really make A to do list of that I can remember them there.
✓ Oh, not much to remember. The deadlines of my arrangements, and I really make a to-do list so that I can remember them.
原句中“not tested”用词不当,应为“not much to remember”。另外,“make A to do list of that”表达不正确,应为“make a to-do list”。建议使用正确的量词和短语表达数量和目的。
× I really make A to do list. So that I can remember them and. Whenever I come up an important idea or important things to do. I just write it down on my phone.
✓ I really make a to-do list so that I can remember things. Whenever I come up with an important idea or important things to do, I just write them down on my phone.
原句断句不当,导致表达不连贯。应将句子合并,使用正确的介词“come up with”,并保持句子完整。建议注意句子连贯性和正确使用介词。