Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I can remember peoples names and their physis easily.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes I want to go to my best friends birthday. And I feel I felt terrible for you.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need to remember important and. Emails. For my daily life. Because it is important for. I don't want. Important for me to respond it.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I also write down in a notebook in the planner. Also I. I take a list and the cross of the items. As I complete.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误,且表达不够自然。建议注意单复数形式和单词拼写,避免使用错误词汇。可以用更自然的表达方式来回答问题。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially people's names and faces.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰,语法混乱,表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题,说明忘记了什么重要的事情,并表达感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, and I felt really terrible about it.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答语句不完整且重复,表达不清晰。建议组织完整句子,明确说明需要记住的具体内容及原因。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important emails because I have to respond to them on time.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用完整句子,清晰描述记忆方法,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually write important things down in a planner and make a list, crossing off items as I complete them.
× Yes, I can remember peoples names and their physis easily.
✓ Yes, I can remember people's names and their faces easily.
这里“peoples”应为“people's”,表示“人们的”,是所有格形式;“physis”拼写错误,应为“faces”,表示“脸”。这是单复数和拼写错误的问题。
× Yes I want to go to my best friends birthday.
✓ Yes, I wanted to go to my best friend's birthday.
这里描述过去的事情,动词应使用过去时“wanted”;“best friends”应为所有格“best friend's”,表示“最好的朋友的”。
× And I feel I felt terrible for you.
✓ And I felt terrible about it.
句子结构混乱,时态不一致,应统一使用过去时“felt”;“for you”不合适,表达应为“about it”,指代忘记的事情。
× I need to remember important and. Emails. For my daily life. Because it is important for. I don't want. Important for me to respond it.
✓ I need to remember important emails in my daily life because it is important for me to respond to them.
原句断句错误,语序混乱,缺少必要的连接词和介词,导致句意不清。应合并为完整句子,使用正确的介词“to respond to”。
× I also write down in a notebook in the planner. Also I. I take a list and the cross of the items. As I complete.
✓ I also write things down in a notebook or planner. Also, I make a list and cross off the items as I complete them.
句子断裂,缺少主语和谓语的连贯,表达不完整。应调整句子结构,使用正确的动词短语“cross off”,并补充代词“them”指代事项。