Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，比如“forgive”应为“forget”，并且句子结构不够清晰。建议你直接回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇和语法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. Usually, I remember details clearly, but to improve my memory, I often write important information down.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“starter to my company”应为“a new employee at my company”，并且句子较长且不连贯。建议简洁明了地表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: When I was new at my company, I often forgot important tasks assigned by my boss. Therefore, I developed the habit of writing things down to avoid forgetting.

Gợi ý: 回答内容重复，且“aligned to me”应为“assigned to me”。建议避免重复表达，使用更丰富的词汇，并且句子结构更自然。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important work tasks assigned by my boss and routine personal errands. To keep track, I usually write notes on my phone.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在时态错误和表达不清，如“told it to my close friends”应为“tell my close friends”，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually write important things down on my phone. Sometimes, I also tell my close friends about urgent tasks so they can remind me and help me not to forget.

× Yes, uh. Most of the time I I remember things very clearly, and I seldom forgive things, but sometimes, in order to strengthen my memory, I always write things down to memorize it.

✓ Yes, uh. Most of the time I remember things very clearly, and I seldom forget things, but sometimes, in order to strengthen my memory, I always write things down to memorize them.

The student used 'forgive' instead of 'forget'. 'Forgive' means to stop feeling angry or resentful, which is incorrect here. The correct verb is 'forget', meaning to fail to remember. Also, 'memorize it' should be 'memorize them' to agree with the plural 'things'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× When I was a starter to my company, I usually for get some important tasks my boss aligned to me and at that time I built the habit to write things down so that I wouldn't.

✓ When I was a starter at my company, I usually forgot some important tasks my boss assigned to me and at that time I built the habit of writing things down so that I wouldn't.

The verb 'for get' is incorrect; it should be 'forgot' to indicate past tense. Also, 'aligned to me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'assigned to me'. 'Built the habit to write' should be 'built the habit of writing' to use the correct verb form after 'habit'. These are past tense issues (ID 5) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× When I was a starter to my company, I usually for get some important tasks my boss aligned to me and at that time I built the habit to write things down so that I wouldn't.

✓ When I was a starter at my company, I usually forgot some important tasks my boss assigned to me and at that time I built the habit of writing things down so that I wouldn't.

The preposition 'to' after 'starter' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at'. Also, 'aligned to me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'assigned to me'. These are incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× In my work, I have to remember the important tasks my boss aligned to me, and in my daily life I need to remember some ordinary things I have to do in my everyday life. So I usually write things down on my phone.

✓ In my work, I have to remember the important tasks my boss assigned to me, and in my daily life I need to remember some ordinary things I have to do every day. So I usually write things down on my phone.

The phrase 'aligned to me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'assigned to me'. Also, 'in my everyday life' is redundant after 'in my daily life' and 'everyday' should be 'every day' as an adverb. These are incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13).

× Sometimes I write things down on my phone, sometimes I told it to my close friends and ask them to remember things for me and allow me about the essential and urgent things to make sure I wouldn't forget them.

✓ Sometimes I write things down on my phone, sometimes I tell it to my close friends and ask them to remember things for me and remind me about the essential and urgent things to make sure I wouldn't forget them.

The verb 'told' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'tell'. Also, 'allow me about' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remind me about'. These are past tense issue (ID 5) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).