Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且有重复和冗余。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorizing things now, but I was better at it when I was in primary and junior high school.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用简单句表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I don't think I have forgotten anything important because I always double-check important things before traveling or doing other activities.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少清晰的主题句和具体细节。建议先明确主题句，再补充具体内容，注意句子完整性。

Ví dụ: As a student who just graduated from high school, I need to remember the knowledge I learn and prepare well for upcoming tests.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够连贯，句子结构混乱。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明方法。

Ví dụ: To remember important things, I repeat them in my mind several times. For physical items like my ID card, I place them on my desk as a reminder.

× as the ages grows grows and as I getting older

✓ as the age grows and as I get older

这里“ages”应为单数“age”，因为指的是时间的增长；动词“grows”应与单数主语“age”一致；“as I getting older”中“getting”应改为动词原形“get”，因为前面有助动词“as”引导的状语从句。

× I don't really think I forgotten something important

✓ I don't really think I have forgotten something important

“forgotten”是过去分词，前面缺少助动词“have”，构成现在完成时，表示过去发生的动作对现在有影响。

× before I travel or doing something else

✓ before I travel or do something else

“before”后面应接动词原形，“doing”应改为“do”，保持并列结构一致。

× I think I the things that I have to remember now is the knowledge I need to learn and to get rid of the test an but

✓ I think the things that I have to remember now are the knowledge I need to learn and to get ready for the test

“things”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”；“get rid of the test”表达不当，应为“get ready for the test”，表示准备考试。

× to get rid of the test an but

✓ to get ready for the test

“get rid of”意为“摆脱”，与考试不符，应使用“get ready for”表示“为考试做准备”。

× For me I think to remember something important is requires me to think of it for many times in my mind

✓ For me, I think remembering something important requires me to think about it many times in my mind

“is requires”结构错误，应去掉“is”；“to remember”改为动名词“remembering”作主语；“think of it for many times”应改为“think about it many times”，表达更自然。

× So like knowledge. So another hand like some ID card or things I have to put it on the desk or table to remind me.

✓ For example, knowledge. On the other hand, for some ID cards or things, I have to put them on the desk or table to remind me.

“So like”表达不正式，应改为“For example”；“another hand”应为“on the other hand”；“put it”应改为“put them”，与复数“ID cards or things”一致。