Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No I'm not to be honest here. Sometimes our exams need to memory something like text and nose. But I need to spend more time to marrying them and in Derry lives I also don't remember something just are so.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, often. Uh, for for example last weekend. I want to buy a train ticket to visit my boyfriend, but I. Buys a mistake ticket. So I. Spend long time to go to my boyfriend's house.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In my diary life, I don't think I need to remember something important, almost things. Like, oh. Now I'm in location I don't have something important to do so I am so. Cashier.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Oh oh, I master use the note notebook. Because I always I always forget something but. Notebook is so useful that you can. Always look under the notebook too.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰,语法和词汇使用存在较多错误,导致表达不自然且难以理解。建议简化句子结构,直接回答问题,并用简单明了的语言表达观点。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Sometimes I have to spend a lot of time studying texts for exams, but I still find it difficult to remember everything.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,建议使用完整句子并注意时态一致,同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, last weekend I wanted to buy a train ticket to visit my boyfriend, but I bought the wrong ticket. As a result, I spent a long time getting to his house.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不明确且语法混乱,建议直接回答问题,说明日常生活中需要记住的具体事项,并使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and important tasks to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰,语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法,并使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。
Ví dụ: I usually use a notebook to remember important things because I often forget them. The notebook is very useful since I can always check it when needed.
× Sometimes our exams need to memory something like text and nose.
✓ Sometimes our exams need to memorize something like text and notes.
这里'memory'是名词,句中需要动词形式,正确用法是'memorize',表示记忆某物。
× But I need to spend more time to marrying them and in Derry lives I also don't remember something just are so.
✓ But I need to spend more time memorizing them and in daily life I also don't remember some things just like that.
'to marrying'用法错误,应该用动词的-ing形式'memorizing'表示花时间做某事。
× Yes, often. Uh, for for example last weekend. I want to buy a train ticket to visit my boyfriend, but I. Buys a mistake ticket.
✓ Yes, often. Uh, for example last weekend, I wanted to buy a train ticket to visit my boyfriend, but I bought a wrong ticket.
描述过去事件时,动词应使用过去时态,'want'应为'wanted','buys'应为'bought'。
× So I. Spend long time to go to my boyfriend's house.
✓ So I spent a long time going to my boyfriend's house.
描述过去动作,动词'spend'应使用过去式'spent'。
× In my diary life, I don't think I need to remember something important, almost things.
✓ In my daily life, I don't think I need to remember anything important, almost nothing.
'diary life'应为'daily life','almost things'表达不当,应为'almost nothing'表示几乎没有。
× Like, oh. Now I'm in location I don't have something important to do so I am so. Cashier.
✓ Like, oh. Now I'm at a location, I don't have anything important to do so I am so casual.
'in location'应为'at a location','something important'应为'anything important','cashier'用词错误,可能想表达'casual'。
× Oh oh, I master use the note notebook.
✓ Oh oh, I mainly use a notebook.
'master use'表达不正确,应为'mainly use','note notebook'重复,应简化为'notebook'。
× Because I always I always forget something but. Notebook is so useful that you can. Always look under the notebook too.
✓ Because I always forget something, but the notebook is so useful that you can always look at it.
句子结构混乱,'look under the notebook'不合适,应为'look at it',并且去除重复。