Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence due to incomplete sentences. Try to make your response more concise and structured by giving a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure sentences are complete.

Ví dụ: I am not very good at memorising things because I have a short-term memory. However, when I was in school, my memory was stronger, and I could remember most things easily. Nowadays, I find it difficult to recall information quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides a relevant example but contains grammatical errors and some repetition. To improve, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and check for subject-verb agreement. Also, try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same information.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times. For instance, last week I forgot my best friend's birthday, which disappointed her because we have been friends since childhood. It was important for me to remember, but unfortunately, I did not.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Make sure to complete your sentences and provide specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid vague statements. Try to give a clear topic sentence followed by examples.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember several things, especially to eat three proper meals a day. Sometimes, I forget to have meals, which affects my health, so I try to remind myself to maintain good nutrition.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and clear but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases and try to be more concise.

Ví dụ: Since I have a short-term memory, I rely on the notes app on my mobile phone to keep track of important tasks and reminders. Whenever I feel uncertain, I check my phone, which helps me stay focused and organised.

× I have a very short term memory and often forget about the things which I was supposed to remember.

✓ I have a very short-term memory and often forget the things which I was supposed to remember.

The phrase 'short term memory' should be hyphenated as 'short-term memory' because it is a compound adjective describing 'memory'. Also, 'forget about the things' is better expressed as 'forget the things' to avoid unnecessary preposition usage.

× And I would say when I was in school my. Memory was strong and I used to remember all the things, but nowadays I have. I feel that it is very difficult for me to recall the.

✓ When I was in school, my memory was strong and I used to remember all things, but nowadays I feel that it is very difficult for me to recall them.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incomplete thoughts. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I'm a several times I have forgotten about things which I was supposed to remember.

✓ Yes, several times I have forgotten things which I was supposed to remember.

The phrase 'I'm a several times' is incorrect. It should be 'several times' without 'I'm a'. Also, 'forgotten about things' is better as 'forgotten things' to avoid unnecessary preposition.

× For example I would say last week it was it was my best friends birthday and I forgot about it and he was very disappointed in me as we have been friends since childhood and it was very important for me to remember her birthday and I forgot about it so she was very mad.

✓ For example, last week it was my best friend's birthday and I forgot about it. He was very disappointed in me as we have been friends since childhood. It was very important for me to remember her birthday, but I forgot, so she was very mad.

The sentence is too long and lacks proper punctuation. Also, 'best friends birthday' should be 'best friend's birthday' to show possession. Breaking into shorter sentences improves readability and correctness.

× In my daily life, I would say there are quite a few things which I need to remember.

✓ In my daily life, I would say there are quite a few things that I need to remember.

Using 'that' instead of 'which' is more appropriate in restrictive clauses in English.

× For example, I would say that. I use sometimes even forget to consume 3 meals a day, so I need to remember that I have to take proper nutrition to survive as I often skip meals and.

✓ For example, I sometimes even forget to consume three meals a day, so I need to remember to take proper nutrition to survive as I often skip meals.

The sentence is fragmented and has misplaced words. 'I use sometimes even forget' is incorrect; it should be 'I sometimes even forget'. Also, numbers under ten are better written in words ('three'). The sentence ending with 'and' is incomplete and should be removed.

× As I have already short term memory, I usually forget the important things, so I use the notes app in my mobile phone to keep a list of all the tasks and reminders which I have to remember.

✓ As I already have a short-term memory, I usually forget important things, so I use the notes app on my mobile phone to keep a list of all the tasks and reminders I have to remember.

The phrase 'I have already short term memory' is incorrect; it should be 'I already have a short-term memory'. Also, 'in my mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone'. 'Which I have to remember' can be simplified to 'I have to remember'.

× So whenever I feel like I'm missing something, I would just check up my phone and I would know what I have been missing so it would help me to stay focus.

✓ So whenever I feel like I'm missing something, I just check my phone and I know what I have been missing, so it helps me to stay focused.

The phrase 'check up my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'check my phone'. Also, 'stay focus' should be 'stay focused'. Using 'would' is unnecessary here; present tense is more appropriate.