Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题，如“kick knack”应为“knack”，且句子结构稍显复杂。建议注意语法准确性，避免拼写错误，并简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can remember a song after listening to it only once. Also, I often get high scores in subjects like history and literature because I have a good memory for details.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误和重复，如“my best my best friends birthday”，且部分表达不够连贯。建议注意语法和句子连贯性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Last year, I was so busy with my studies that I completely forgot my best friend's birthday. She was upset and didn't accept my apology at first, but luckily we talked it over and made up.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且较连贯，但部分表达略显冗长且有语法问题，如“drop down”应为“write down”。建议注意用词准确性，简化句子结构，并适当使用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember small things like where my classes are, my internship schedule, and assignments from teachers. To keep track, I usually write important information down on my phone so I don't forget.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够准确，“drop down”应为“write down”，且最后一句“last minute house”表达不清。建议注意词汇使用准确性，避免模糊表达，并完善句子结构。

Ví dụ: I usually write important things down on my phone so I can check them quickly. This helps me keep track of deadlines and appointments. Honestly, this habit saves me from a lot of last-minute stress.

× I constantly score high in memorization heavy subject like history in literature thanks to this kick knack for retaining information.

✓ I constantly score high in memorization-heavy subjects like history and literature thanks to this knack for retaining information.

这里'subject'应为复数'subjects'，因为提到了多个科目（history和literature）。'kick knack'应为'knack'，且'memorization heavy'应加连字符变成形容词短语'memorization-heavy'。

× Late last year I was swamped with studies in completely forgot my best my best friends birthday.

✓ Late last year I was swamped with studies and completely forgot my best friend's birthday.

句中缺少连词'and'连接两个动作，且'best my best friends'重复，应改为'best friend's'表示所有格。

× Unfortunately she didn't expect my apology efforts and we almost got into an argument.

✓ Unfortunately, she didn't accept my apology efforts and we almost got into an argument.

'expect'用错，应该用'accept'表示接受道歉。

× Most of them are everyday little things like classroom location for lectures, internship schedule with subway routes or assignments for teachers and talks from supervisors, but I usually drop down important stuff on my phone to track promptly.

✓ Most of them are everyday little things like classroom locations for lectures, internship schedules with subway routes, or assignments from teachers and talks from supervisors, but I usually jot down important stuff on my phone to track promptly.

'location'和'schedule'应为复数。'assignments for teachers'应为'assignments from teachers'表示老师布置的作业。'drop down'用错，正确表达是'jot down'表示快速记下。

× I usually drop down important stuff on my phone to check promptly.

✓ I usually jot down important stuff on my phone to check promptly.

'drop down'用错，正确表达是'jot down'表示快速记下。

× Honestly this habit saves me from a lot of last minute house.

✓ Honestly, this habit saves me from a lot of last-minute hassle.

'house'用错，应为'hassle'表示麻烦。'last minute'作为复合形容词应加连字符。