Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（"peoples names"は"people's names"）を修正し、より具体的な詳細を加えると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って文の流れを滑らかにすることをお勧めします。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often struggle to remember people's names and faces, so I usually write their names down in a notebook to help me recall them later.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が少し不明瞭で、"Destiny's entry"の意味が不明です。文法の誤りもあります。より明確に状況を説明し、接続詞を使って文を繋げると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my passport at home when I was going to the airport. Fortunately, I managed to go back and get it in time, but I felt very disappointed with myself.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り（"managed to the deadlines"は不自然）を修正し、より具体的な詳細を加え、接続詞を使って文を繋げることをお勧めします。

Ví dụ: There are many things I need to remember in my daily life, especially at work. For instance, I have to keep track of important meetings with clients and manage the deadlines for my tasks carefully.

Gợi ý: 文の繋がりが不自然で、"writing by hands"は"writing by hand"が正しいです。接続詞を使い、文を一つにまとめるとより自然になります。

Ví dụ: When I need to remember something important, I usually rely on traditional methods, such as writing notes by hand. I often use sticky notes and place them in visible places like on my computer screen.

× I always struggle with memorizing peoples names and faces.

✓ I always struggle with memorizing people's names and faces.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; it should be the possessive form 'people's' to indicate names belonging to people. This is a singular possessive form, not a plural noun.

× So I try to write their name down on my note to help me.

✓ So I try to write their names down in my notebook to help me.

The pronoun 'their' refers to multiple people, so 'name' should be plural 'names'. Also, 'note' should be 'notebook' or 'notes' for clarity, and the preposition 'in' is more appropriate than 'on' for writing in a notebook.

× Luckily I managed to go back, grab it and made it on time, but I felt disappointed with myself.

✓ Luckily I managed to go back, grab it and make it on time, but I felt disappointed with myself.

The verbs in the sequence should be parallel in form. 'Managed to go back' and 'grab' are in base form after 'managed to', so 'made' should be 'make' to maintain parallelism.

× I have to keep track of important meetings with clients and managed to the deadlines of tasks.

✓ I have to keep track of important meetings with clients and manage the deadlines of tasks.

The verb 'managed' is incorrectly used in past tense here; it should be present tense 'manage' to match 'have to keep track' which is present tense. Also, 'managed to the deadlines' is incorrect; it should be 'manage the deadlines'.

× I have to keep track of important meetings with clients and managed to the deadlines of tasks.

✓ I have to keep track of important meetings with clients and manage the deadlines of tasks.

The preposition 'to' after 'managed' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'manage the deadlines' without 'to'.

× Such as writing by hands.

✓ For example, I write by hand.

The phrase 'Such as writing by hands' is a sentence fragment and incorrect. It should be a complete sentence like 'For example, I write by hand.' Also, 'by hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by hand'.

× I write something down on it and put them on visual space like PC.

✓ I write something down on it and put it in a visible place like on my PC.

The pronoun 'them' does not agree with the singular 'something'; it should be 'it'. Also, 'visual space' is incorrect; 'visible place' or 'a visible spot' is more appropriate. Additionally, 'like PC' should be 'like on my PC' for clarity.