Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả của câu trả lời. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things naturally, but when something is important, I make sure to note it down on my phone or write it in a notebook so I don't forget.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý với nhau bằng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. It was really bad of me, and when she found out, she was surprised and I felt very upset about it.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính hiệu quả và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp, đồng thời tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu.

Ví dụ: I need to remember my school schedule, especially during summer vacation when I attend extra classes. Also, I have set some important goals that I want to keep in mind.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: To remember important things, I usually write them down in my notebook and check it when I forget. Sometimes, I also note them on my phone because I always carry it with me when I go out.

× Actually I'm not good at memorizing things, but sometime it this things is important that I need to.

✓ Actually I'm not good at memorizing things, but sometimes these things are important that I need to.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'this things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should be preceded by 'these'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'things'.

× I remember I always not it in my phone or I will write it down.

✓ I remember I always note it in my phone or I will write it down.

The phrase 'I always not it' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'note'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.

× Yes I have. I have forgotten my best friend birthday I know it was a bad of me I feel.

✓ Yes I have. I have forgotten my best friend's birthday. I know it was bad of me, I feel.

'best friend birthday' should be 'best friend's birthday' to show possession. 'a bad of me' is incorrect; it should be 'bad of me'. Also, punctuation is needed to separate ideas.

× Required. I mean, when she knew that I forgot. Her buddy I was so she was surprised and I was so upset.

✓ I mean, when she knew that I forgot her birthday, she was surprised and I was so upset.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Required.' is unnecessary. 'Her buddy' should be 'her birthday'. The sentence needs to be combined properly.

× Am I saying I need to remember my school schedule?

✓ I am saying I need to remember my school schedule.

'Am I saying' is a question form but the sentence is a statement. It should be 'I am saying' to match the intended meaning.

× I mean now I'm have a summer vacation but I always have to go to my extra classes.

✓ I mean now I have a summer vacation but I always have to go to my extra classes.

'I'm have' is incorrect; it should be 'I have' to correctly express possession in present tense.

× Ann I have made a 30 BLN an I want to remember this.

✓ And I have made a 30 BLN and I want to remember this.

'Ann' should be 'And'. The sentence is unclear; '30 BLN' likely refers to an amount but needs context. The sentence structure is awkward and needs clarification.

× With important things, I usually write them down on my notebook too.

✓ For important things, I usually write them down in my notebook too.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'notebook'; the correct preposition is 'in' because you write inside a notebook.

× Come look at them when I forgot or sometimes I will tech nor it in my phone because I always bring my phone.

✓ I look at them when I forget, or sometimes I will teach note it in my phone because I always bring my phone.

The sentence is confusing and contains errors like 'Come look' and 'tech nor it'. It should be 'I look at them when I forget, or sometimes I will take note of it in my phone'.

× Outsides.

✓ Outside.

'Outsides' is incorrect; the correct word is 'outside' to indicate being out of the house or building.