Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things, For example, well, I'm study English. It is difficult for me because I can't. Oh, memories are. Meaning of the words.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, the when I'm taking a taxi with my friends, I lost my phone on the taxi.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Because I am a college student so in my daily life or I usually remember my schedule and the wax should I have in the next class.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I over remember important things into his. First I will write it on my notebook and the second I will. Oh. Make a magazine and all on the. Computer.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法错误较多,表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并用完整句子表达原因。
Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially English vocabulary, because I find it hard to remember the meanings of new words.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容简单且语法错误明显,建议使用完整句子并补充细节使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, once when I was taking a taxi with my friends, I accidentally left my phone in the taxi and couldn't get it back.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰,语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议直接回答并具体说明需要记住的内容。
Ví dụ: As a college student, I usually need to remember my daily schedule and the homework I have to complete for my next class.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且含糊,语法错误严重。建议清晰描述记忆方法,使用连贯句子。
Ví dụ: To remember important things, I first write them down in my notebook, and then I save reminders on my computer or phone.
× Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things, For example, well, I'm study English.
✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things. For example, well, I study English.
这里的错误是动词时态错误,'I'm study' 应该改为 'I study',因为主语是第一人称单数,动词用一般现在时。
× It is difficult for me because I can't. Oh, memories are. Meaning of the words.
✓ It is difficult for me because I can't remember the meanings of the words.
原句结构混乱,缺少完整的谓语和宾语,应该合并成一句完整的句子,表达清楚“我不能记住单词的意思”。
× Yes, the when I'm taking a taxi with my friends, I lost my phone on the taxi.
✓ Yes, when I was taking a taxi with my friends, I lost my phone in the taxi.
句子结构错误,'the when'多余且不正确,时态应为过去进行时 'was taking',介词应为'in'而非'on'。
× Because I am a college student so in my daily life or I usually remember my schedule and the wax should I have in the next class.
✓ Because I am a college student, in my daily life I usually remember my schedule and the work I should do in the next class.
句子结构混乱,'or'不合适,'wax'应为'work',并且句子需要调整使其通顺。
× I over remember important things into his. First I will write it on my notebook and the second I will. Oh. Make a magazine and all on the. Computer.
✓ I often remember important things in this way. First, I will write them in my notebook, and second, I will make a reminder on the computer.
句子结构混乱,'over remember'不正确,应为'often remember','into his'无意义,'make a magazine'应为'make a reminder',并且句子需要连贯表达。