Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达记忆力不好的情况。

Ví dụ: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially if I'm not interested in them. For example, I often forget things like coffee orders. People have told me that if I'm not interested, I tend to forget quickly. English vocabulary is also quite challenging for me.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议先明确事件，再用连贯的句子描述细节，避免断句错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, once when I was traveling, I realized I had forgotten my ID card before taking the high-speed train. Since many things require ID, I immediately applied for a temporary ID card to solve the problem.

Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用准确的词汇并且结构更清晰，避免拼写错误。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like assignment deadlines and interviews or meetings. Missing these can have serious consequences.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，表达不连贯，难以理解。建议简化句子，清晰表达记忆方法，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Since my memory is not very good, I usually write important things down or set reminders on my phone. This helps me remember tasks and appointments more easily.

× Actually I'm not good and empowering things in specially for things that I am not interested in I usually forget, such as coffee.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at remembering things, especially things that I am not interested in. I usually forget, such as coffee.

句中使用了错误的连词“and”，应使用介词短语“good at”来表达擅长某事，且句子结构混乱，需拆分为两个句子以表达清晰。

× Actually I'm not good and empowering things in specially for things that I am not interested in I usually forget, such as coffee.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at remembering things, especially things that I am not interested in. I usually forget, such as coffee.

介词使用错误，“good and empowering things in specially for”不符合英语习惯，应使用“good at remembering things, especially”。

× Told to me by others, if I'm not interested, I may forget the next day.

✓ I was told by others that if I'm not interested, I may forget the next day.

句子结构不完整，“Told to me by others”缺少主语，需改为被动语态完整表达。

× And honestly is unmanly.

✓ And honestly, it is difficult for me.

“unmanly”用词不当，语义不清，应使用更合适的形容词表达困难。

× English word is also quite difficult for me.

✓ English words are also quite difficult for me.

“English word”应为复数形式“English words”，且缺少冠词。

× Well let me see, I remember one time when I was traveling and replying to take the high speed train and realized that I had forgotten my ID card.

✓ Well, let me see. I remember one time when I was traveling and preparing to take the high-speed train and realized that I had forgotten my ID card.

“replying”用词错误，应为“preparing”；句中缺少逗号分隔，影响理解。

× Many things cannot be slow with smartphone.

✓ Many things cannot be done slowly with a smartphone.

介词和词语搭配错误，应使用“done slowly with a smartphone”表达正确含义。

× I immediately. Applied for temporary ID card till soul of this problem.

✓ I immediately applied for a temporary ID card to solve this problem.

句子断裂且用词错误，“till soul”应为“to solve”，且缺少冠词。

× Well, I think there are several things I need to remember, the most important of which are the deadline for cause assignments and so importantly, Redmond Suders interviews or meetings.

✓ Well, I think there are several things I need to remember, the most important of which are the deadlines for course assignments and, more importantly, Redmond Suders interviews or meetings.

“deadline”应为复数“deadlines”，“cause”应为“course”，且句中缺少逗号。

× Missing this will have serious consequences. 'Cause quizzes.

✓ Missing these will have serious consequences, such as quizzes.

“'Cause quizzes”表达不完整，应改为“such as quizzes”以明确含义。

× Well, as I mentioned before, my memory is not very good, is there are not many things I can still handle them, but if there are many shadows in a short period of time, I will ever easily forget were there for at this time and will list to this random answering my phone for music compilation.

✓ Well, as I mentioned before, my memory is not very good. There are not many things I cannot handle, but if there are many tasks in a short period of time, I will easily forget. At such times, I listen to music compilations on my phone to help me focus.

句子结构混乱，语法错误多，需拆分为多个句子并调整词汇以表达清晰。