Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然且有语法错误，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things. Usually, I have to write down my daily tasks to make sure I don't forget anything important.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但语法和表达不准确，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰描述事件，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot to bring my presentation to a meeting at 10 o'clock yesterday, which made me feel unprofessional.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复，并且逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: I need to remember all the tasks I have to complete, such as finishing reports. I usually write down the details to help me stay organized.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了方法，但句子结构不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，正确使用连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually make a list of tasks I need to complete. Then, I check them off one by one and set an alarm to remind me to finish my work on time.

× I really forgot to all my details of for daily work, you know, I have to write down something what I should do the whole day that too.

✓ I really forgot all my details for daily work, you know, I have to write down what I should do the whole day, that too.

这里“forgot to all my details of for daily work”中“details”是复数，但表达不清晰且多余介词，应该去掉“to”和“of”，使句子更通顺。

× I really forgot to all my details of for daily work, you know, I have to write down something what I should do the whole day that too.

✓ I really forgot all my details for daily work, you know, I have to write down what I should do the whole day, that too.

句子结构混乱，“something what I should do”应改为“what I should do”，使句子结构正确。

× Well, one of the most important thing I have forgotten was my presentation.

✓ Well, one of the most important things I have forgotten was my presentation.

“one of the most important thing”中“thing”应为复数“things”，因为“one of the”后面应接复数名词。

× I forgot to take a presentation on 10:00 yesterday on SO that made me really unprofessional.

✓ I forgot to give a presentation at 10:00 yesterday, so that made me really unprofessional.

“forgot to take a presentation”表达不正确，应为“forgot to give a presentation”；时间点前应使用介词“at”；“on SO”应为“so”表示因果关系。

× I forgot to take a presentation on 10:00 yesterday on SO that made me really unprofessional.

✓ I forgot to give a presentation at 10:00 yesterday, so that made me really unprofessional.

时间点前应使用介词“at”，而不是“on”；“on SO”应为“so”，表示因果关系。

× So as you know, I'm not good at memorizing things, so I need to remember all types of work I should be finished.

✓ So as you know, I'm not good at memorizing things, so I need to remember all types of work I should finish.

“work”是不可数名词，不用“be finished”，应直接用动词原形“finish”。

× I need to dress down all the details for this report and another report.

✓ I need to write down all the details for this report and another report.

“dress down”是错误搭配，应为“write down”，表示“写下”。

× OK, I often make the list for everything I have to finish on.

✓ OK, I often make a list of everything I have to finish.

“make the list for everything I have to finish on”结构不正确，应为“make a list of everything I have to finish”。

× Then I will check the right line on and I will take alarm clock to remind me.

✓ Then I will check the right line, and I will set an alarm clock to remind me.

“check the right line on”表达不清，应调整为“check the right line”；“take alarm clock”应为“set an alarm clock”。