Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes I am because when I was a primary school student my mass was really good. Annemasse is a subject test needs the memorizing ability to memorize and loss awful historicals thing and I'm was just good at it.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I remember when I was in power school and one of the important exam I just forgot bringing my student club to the testing. Area.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In my daily life, first I need to remember the tasks I need to compete in my word. Additionally, I also need to remember the houses words I need to.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I preferred to writing down the tasks I need to do tomorrow before before the day because I'm a person who is easily to forget seeing a. However, if I dress writing down at which just how?
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,影响了答案的自然流畅性。建议简化句子结构,避免重复和拼写错误,明确表达自己的观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things because when I was in primary school, I was able to remember historical facts easily, which helped me in my exams.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当,导致表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇,简洁明了地描述事件。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For example, when I was in primary school, I forgot to bring my student ID to an important exam, which caused some trouble.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱,词汇使用错误。建议明确列出日常需要记住的具体事项,并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember the tasks I have to complete at work and also the household chores I need to do.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重,表达不连贯,难以理解。建议使用简单句子清楚表达记忆方法,并避免重复和拼写错误。
Ví dụ: I prefer to write down the tasks I need to do the next day because I tend to forget things easily. Writing helps me remember important tasks.
× Yes I am because when I was a primary school student my mass was really good.
✓ Yes I am because when I was a primary school student my memory was really good.
这里的'mass'应为'memory',但主要语法问题是时态使用正确,句子中没有时态错误。此句中没有明显的过去时态错误,但'mass'是拼写错误,应改为'memory'。
× Annemasse is a subject test needs the memorizing ability to memorize and loss awful historicals thing and I'm was just good at it.
✓ Annemasse is a subject test that needs the memorizing ability to memorize and learn awful historical things, and I was just good at it.
句子结构混乱,缺少连接词'that','loss'应为'learn','historicals thing'应为'historical things'。'I'm was'是错误的,应为'I was'。需要调整句子结构使其通顺。
× I remember when I was in power school and one of the important exam I just forgot bringing my student club to the testing. Area.
✓ I remember when I was in primary school and for one of the important exams I just forgot to bring my student card to the testing area.
'power school'应为'primary school','exam'应为复数'exams','forgot bringing'应为'forgot to bring','student club'应为'student card','testing. Area'应为'testing area'。时态使用正确,但词汇和短语使用错误。
× In my daily life, first I need to remember the tasks I need to compete in my word.
✓ In my daily life, first I need to remember the tasks I need to complete in my work.
'compete'应为'complete','word'应为'work',这里是词汇错误,影响句意。
× Additionally, I also need to remember the houses words I need to.
✓ Additionally, I also need to remember the household chores I need to do.
'houses words'不合适,应为'household chores',句子不完整,缺少动词,需补充'do'使句子完整。
× I preferred to writing down the tasks I need to do tomorrow before before the day because I'm a person who is easily to forget seeing a.
✓ I prefer to write down the tasks I need to do tomorrow before the day because I'm a person who easily forgets things.
'preferred to writing'应为'prefer to write','easily to forget seeing a'结构错误,应为'easily forgets things'。时态应为一般现在时,表达习惯。
× However, if I dress writing down at which just how?
✓ However, if I don't write things down, I just forget them.
句子结构混乱,'dress writing down at which just how'无意义,应改为'if I don't write things down, I just forget them',使句子通顺且符合语境。